Late as it comes....here is our analysis of the first two ISB essays:
If we were to admit just one more student,
make a compelling argument as to why that student should be you by describing
an (only one) achievement in your personal / professional life that you are
most proud of. What did you do that sets you apart from others? What did you
learn? (300 words)
At the heart of this prompt they are asking
you a simple question - what differentiates you from others? This question has
been an old favourite of ISB, but it was taken off the circuit for a couple of
years. It makes a comeback in a grander style -it's more elaborate than before,
with specific instructions on what to
answer.
ISB wants to know one single example of an achievement
where you did something that others would not do. The example has to be about
using a unique strength, a strength that sets you apart.
So, your foremost task is to identify a
couple of strengths that differentiate you from college mates and colleagues.
Go deeper in your introspection and come up with those traits that have a
constant history of being repeated. As an example, if you are superb at
mentoring people, you would probably have mentored your college colleagues,
your team mates on a technology you learnt before allot hers and maybe even taught
Math to your cousin, who went from being a Math phobic to a high scorer. What
is your biggest quality that differentiates you? Using a repetitive trait will help
you come up with more examples during the interview process as well.
So once you have nailed down your
differentiating factor, select a strong personal or professional story
associated with it.
For the essay writing part, after briefly
mentioning the situation, explain your role in it. What was the challenge
involved? How did you deal with it? How did you use your differentiating factor
to navigate through the situation? What was the outcome and eventually, what
did you learn about yourself?
Having read through huge numbers of ISB
applications over the years, we find that most people don't get under the skin
of their examples. Simply put, they don't do deep introspection on what that
differentiating factor is, why the achievement is their biggest or what they
learned from it. While the examples you illustrate are going to be similar (similar
problems in the IT industry or the banking sector), it is this analysis which
will reveal your thought process and also help to set yourself apart.
Essay
2
Describe
a (only one) defining moment in your personal / professional life when you had
to make a risky decision, and explain what you did, why and the outcome?
ISB has been specific in asking applicants
for one single anecdote per essay this year. This helps applicants add more
depth to every anecdote they mention.
What are the risky decisions you could face
in your professional life ? Letting your colleague get away with no work nor
any contribution to a project could risk your ethics being compromised? Initiating
a project that your boss thought would be a failure would be a risk of losing
face in front of the team. And you could risk your job by disagreeing with your
boss for hiding a blotched software release.
In questions like this one it's not sufficient
to only describe the situation. I was faced by a risky situation and I did
Xxx...that will not do! Explain WHY you took this decision.what prompted you? Was
it your value system which was challenged? Was it because you had the vision to
see that this step would help in the future, as in suggesting an initiative
which no one else believed in?
Then explain, what was the risk itself?
Would you lose an upcoming promotion? Would you lose the leadership of a team?
Worse, Would you be asked to pack your bags? The risk in question does not have
to be so dramatic, but the reader must be able to clearly visualise that you
were going to lose something important. Basically something personal has to be at
stake. And that fact that you still stuck to your guns make you a bravo! The
kinds that adcom wants to meet for an interview.
or
Describe
a (only one) situation in your personal / professional life when you had to
interact with people from diverse backgrounds. How did it affect you and what
did you learn? (300 words)
This is an interesting question as ISB has
never before asked questions on cultural diversity. With their class size
increasing from 500 two years ago to 750 now, ISB surely wants to focus on this
element.
So if you were put in a situation where
your team members had different backgrounds as compared to yours, then how
would you behave?
If there was a conflict among this group
would you try to bridge it? ISB is not looking for a conclusive answer where
you ensure that everything ends well and you are the clear winner in the
situation. Despite that you would like to frame an answer that shows your
maturity in handling unrelenting team members, and your adaptability to their
perspectives. Also, take atleast a hundred words of space to explain the impact
this situation has had on you- what did you learn, how did you change yourself?
A b-school environment is all about learning
from different perspectives after all, so you would want to make sure that you
come across as a person who will thrive in this environment. Your situation can
be from the professional or the personal realm, although we strongly suggest
that you use atleast one professional example between the first two essays.
Also, a diversity situation does not have to involve interactions with
foreigners and foreign locales, Shahrukh Khan movies style. India has enough diversity within itself.
Hope this helps 😃