GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Hi Puys,

Have a look at the below 4 Qs.Pls explain the PoE here...

1)The unskilled workers at the Allenby plant realized that their hourly rate of $4.11 to $4.75 was better than many nearby factory wages.
A. many nearby factory wages
B. it is in many nearby factories
C. many wages in nearby factories
D. that offered by many nearby factories
E. what are offered by many nearby factories

2) The lack of complete historical records from the mid-to-late 1800's have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators.
A. have made it difficult to trace some inventions by Blacks to their originators
B. have made for difficulties in tracing some inventions by Blacks to their originators
C. has made it difficult to trace some inventions to their Black originators
D. has made it difficult in tracing some Black inventions to their originators
E. have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators

3) The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A. contact with it directly with
B. direct contact with it by way of
C. contact directly with the mystical level due to
D. direct contact with the latter by means of
E. contact with the latter directly through

4) Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over them would not become turbulent.
A. wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
B. wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and perfectly so
C. wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
D. wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
E. wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly


Whats the OA?
Hi Puys,

Have a look at the below three Qs.Pls explain the PoE here...

1)The unskilled workers at the Allenby plant realized that their hourly rate of $4.11 to $4.75 was better than many nearby factory wages.
A. many nearby factory wages
B. it is in many nearby factories
C. many wages in nearby factories
D. that offered by many nearby factories
E. what are offered by many nearby factories

2) The lack of complete historical records from the mid-to-late 1800's have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators.
A. have made it difficult to trace some inventions by Blacks to their originators
B. have made for difficulties in tracing some inventions by Blacks to their originators
C. has made it difficult to trace some inventions to their Black originators
D. has made it difficult in tracing some Black inventions to their originators
E. have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators

3) The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A. contact with it directly with
B. direct contact with it by way of
C. contact directly with the mystical level due to
D. direct contact with the latter by means of
E. contact with the latter directly through

Q1: D
Q2: C
Q3: D


Q1:
(A) - "hourly rate" compared with "wages" (not rate), hence eliminated
(B) - "it" has no antecedent, hence eliminated
(C) - same as (A)
(E) - "what are" is awkward
hence my take is (D)

Q2:
A lack of X "has"... (and not "have") hence eliminated (A), (B), (E)
between (C) and (D), "Difficult to trace" is more idiomatic than "difficult in tracing"
my take (C)

Q3:
in (A) & (B) - "it" has no antecedent. hence eliminated
(C) - "due to" is only used when it can be replaced by "caused by". hence it's use is inappropriate in this sentence
I'm confused between (D) & (E),
simplifying the sentence as follows, I'll pick (D)

A's believed that all things participated in both X and Y, many individual A's claimed to have direct contact...

i.e. I'll prefer "...have direct contact..." to "...have contact directly with..."

hence my take is (D)
Hi Puys,

Have a look at the below 4 Qs.Pls explain the PoE here...

1)The unskilled workers at the Allenby plant realized that their hourly rate of $4.11 to $4.75 was better than many nearby factory wages.
A. many nearby factory wages
B. it is in many nearby factories
C. many wages in nearby factories
D. that offered by many nearby factories
E. what are offered by many nearby factories

2) The lack of complete historical records from the mid-to-late 1800's have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators.
A. have made it difficult to trace some inventions by Blacks to their originators
B. have made for difficulties in tracing some inventions by Blacks to their originators
C. has made it difficult to trace some inventions to their Black originators
D. has made it difficult in tracing some Black inventions to their originators
E. have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators

3) The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A. contact with it directly with
B. direct contact with it by way of
C. contact directly with the mystical level due to
D. direct contact with the latter by means of
E. contact with the latter directly through

4) Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over them would not become turbulent.
A. wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
B. wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and perfectly so
C. wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
D. wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
E. wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly


My answers will be:
1) D
2) C
3) E
4) E

@VIKX: 1 suggestion: you can edit your earlier reply instead of posting new ones (those quotes are quite long thats why :)... )
NOM πŸ˜ƒ

@VIKX: 1 suggestion: you can edit your earlier reply instead of posting new ones (those quotes are quite long thats why :)... )
NOM :)



Ok Sir, as you say.
@VIKX: 1 suggestion: you can edit your earlier reply instead of posting new ones (those quotes are quite long thats why :)... )
NOM :)


By the ways you didnt try the 4)??

Just found that its the most trickiest of all πŸ˜ƒ

Hi Here below are the OAs.

I have doubts in 2nd and 4th questions.

2-> Why to trace is preferred to in tracing. And also, can some one elaborate the selection b/w a gerund and a infinitive.
4-> doesn't the second wings sound redundant ?

Hi Puys,

Have a look at the below 4 Qs.Pls explain the PoE here...

1)The unskilled workers at the Allenby plant realized that their hourly rate of $4.11 to $4.75 was better than many nearby factory wages.
A. many nearby factory wages
B. it is in many nearby factories
C. many wages in nearby factories
D. that offered by many nearby factories
E. what are offered by many nearby factories

2) The lack of complete historical records from the mid-to-late 1800's have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators.
A. have made it difficult to trace some inventions by Blacks to their originators
B. have made for difficulties in tracing some inventions by Blacks to their originators
C. has made it difficult to trace some inventions to their Black originators
D. has made it difficult in tracing some Black inventions to their originators
E. have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators

3) The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A. contact with it directly with
B. direct contact with it by way of
C. contact directly with the mystical level due to
D. direct contact with the latter by means of
E. contact with the latter directly through

4) Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over them would not become turbulent.
A. wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
B. wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and perfectly so
C. wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
D. wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
E. wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly

4) Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over them would not become turbulent.
A. wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
B. wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and perfectly so
C. wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
D. wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
E. wings, shaped so smoothly and perfect

The best, and really only, answer to this question is C:

wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped

Using smoothly as an adverb to modify shaped is illogical--you can't "shape" something "smoothly;" you can shape something quickly, easily, lazily, but not smoothly.

That gets rid of B and E. D is wordy and and essentially commits the same error (shaped in a smooth manner = shaped smoothly).

A is wrong because it is ungrammatical to say "shaped so smooth;" "smooth" is an adjective that rightly modifies the noun "wings." We cannot use "shaped" as a linking verb between "wings" and "smooth."

But we can use a be-verb as a linking verb between "wings" and "smooth." B, the only possible answer, uses a reduced form to join "wings" and "smooth:"

wings that are so smooth and so perfectly shaped

=

wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped


Many people ask about the repetition of the word "wings." Again, by the process of reduction our original sentence:

wings, which are wings that are so smooth and so perfectly shaped

gets reduced to

wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped



4) Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over them would not become turbulent.
A. wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
B. wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and perfectly so
C. wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
D. wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
E. wings, shaped so smoothly and perfect



This is the Q of resumptive modifier.

X build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped

Above 'shaped' would refer to a noun that is acting as an object.

X -> subject
build -> verb
Airplanes with frictionless wings -> object

It is not clear whether the past participle 'shaped' refers to airplanes or wings...

Hence we need wings after the comma! thus only B nd C remain. B is

hence C

Regards!
Hi Puys,

Have a look at the below 4 Qs.Pls explain the PoE here...

1)The unskilled workers at the Allenby plant realized that their hourly rate of $4.11 to $4.75 was better than many nearby factory wages.
A. many nearby factory wages
B. it is in many nearby factories
C. many wages in nearby factories
D. that offered by many nearby factories
E. what are offered by many nearby factories

2) The lack of complete historical records from the mid-to-late 1800's have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators.
A. have made it difficult to trace some inventions by Blacks to their originators
B. have made for difficulties in tracing some inventions by Blacks to their originators
C. has made it difficult to trace some inventions to their Black originators
D. has made it difficult in tracing some Black inventions to their originators
E. have made some Black inventions difficult to trace to their originators

3) The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A. contact with it directly with
B. direct contact with it by way of
C. contact directly with the mystical level due to
D. direct contact with the latter by means of
E. contact with the latter directly through

4) Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over them would not become turbulent.
A. wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
B. wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and perfectly so
C. wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
D. wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
E. wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly


my answers are marked in red above. OAs please !!
This is the Q of resumptive modifier.

X build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped

Above 'shaped' would refer to a noun that is acting as an object.

X -> subject
build -> verb
Airplanes with frictionless wings -> object

It is not clear whether the past participle 'shaped' refers to airplanes or wings...

Hence we need wings after the comma! thus only B nd C remain. B is

hence C

Regards!


I would eliminate all the options except B and C based on the fact that there is a pronoun in the second part of the sentence. and in all the options except B and C , the pronoun does not have a clear antecedent. And in B, the meaning is twisted, which gives us a clear and concise C, which also uses the idiom, so ... that correctly.

Originally Posted by mudragada909 View Post
Hi Puys,



1. D
2. C
3. c
4. A
my first post

mvikred Says
my answers are marked in red above. OAs please !!


for 4th, we ahve wings twice in same sentence, i think it should be once...also smoothly and perfectly are adjectives and rulled out, so i think best answer amoong choices would be A...

let me know ur thoughts I could be wrong though

Hi Puys,Here are 6 more questions..explanations pls

1)It could be argued that the most significant virtue of a popular democracy is not the right to 10 participate in the selection of leaders, but rather that it affirms our importance in the scheme of things.
A)but instead of that, its affirming that
B)but rather its affirmation of
C)but rather it's affirmation in terms of
D)affirming rather
E)but rather that it affirms

2)Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients' misconduct stemmed from a reaction to something ingested, but in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, the perpetrators are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions.
A)if criminal or delinquent behavior is attributed to an allergy to some food
B)in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food
C)in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy
D)if some food allergy is attributed as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior
E)in attributing a food allergy as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior

3) The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
A)subscriptions and then took turns drawing
B)subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing
C)subscriptions, then taking turns drawing
D)subscriptions and then took turns, they drew
E)subscriptions and then drew, taking turns

4)An inventory equal to 90 days sales is as much as even the strongest businesses carry, and then only as a way to anticipate higher prices or ensure against shortages.
A)as much as even
B)even so much that
C)even as much that
D)so much as even
E)even so much as

5)A "calendar stick" carved centuries ago by the Winnebago tribe may provide the first evidence that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them on systematic astronomical observation.
A)of the development of advanced full-year calendars by North American Indians, basing them
B)that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them
C)of the North American Indians who have developed advanced full-year calendars and based them
D)that the North American Indians developed advanced full-year calendars based
E)of the North American Indians and their development of advanced full-year calendars based

6) Minnesota is the only one of the contiguous forty-eight states that still has a sizable wolf population, and where this predator remains the archenemy of cattle and sheep.
A) where the population of wolves is still sizable;
B) where there is still a sizable population of wolves and where
C)that still has a sizable wolf population, and where
D)that still has a sizable population of wolves, and where
E)that still has a sizable wolf population, where

Hi Puys,Here are 6 more questions..explanations pls

1)It could be argued that the most significant virtue of a popular democracy is not the right to 10 participate in the selection of leaders, but rather that it affirms our importance in the scheme of things.
A)but instead of that, its affirming that
B)but rather its affirmation of
C)but rather it's affirmation in terms of
D)affirming rather
E)but rather that it affirms

Confused between B&C;,
will pick C - (ABC is Not the X but rather it is Y)


2)Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients' misconduct stemmed from a reaction to something ingested, but in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, the perpetrators are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions.
A)if criminal or delinquent behavior is attributed to an allergy to some food - statement does not contain if clause i.e. if...will...
B)in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food
C)in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy - better than B
D)if some food allergy is attributed as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior - - unidiomatic
E)in attributing a food allergy as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior - unidiomatic

3) The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
A)subscriptions and then took turns drawing - correct
B)subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing
C)subscriptions, then taking turns drawing
D)subscriptions and then took turns, they drew
E)subscriptions and then drew, taking turns

4)An inventory equal to 90 days sales is as much as even the strongest businesses carry, and then only as a way to anticipate higher prices or ensure against shortages.
A)as much as even
B)even so much that
C)even as much that
D)so much as even
E)even so much as

5)A "calendar stick" carved centuries ago by the Winnebago tribe may provide the first evidence that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them on systematic astronomical observation.
A)of the development of advanced full-year calendars by North American Indians, basing them - passive voice
B)that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them
C)of the North American Indians who have developed advanced full-year calendars and based them - evidence of "north American indians"... not the "development of cal by North anerican indians
D)that the North American Indians developed advanced full-year calendars based
E)of the North American Indians and their development of advanced full-year calendars based - evidence of A and B?

6) Minnesota is the only one of the contiguous forty-eight states that still has a sizable wolf population, and where this predator remains the archenemy of cattle and sheep.
A) where the population of wolves is still sizable;
B) where there is still a sizable population of wolves and where
C)that still has a sizable wolf population, and where
D)that still has a sizable population of wolves, and where
E)that still has a sizable wolf population, where


my takes CCADDC
mudragada909 Says
Hi Puys,Here are 6 more questions..explanations pls


1)It could be argued that the most significant virtue of a popular democracy is not the right to 10 participate in the selection of leaders, but rather that it affirms our importance in the scheme of things.
A) but instead of that, its affirming that
B) but rather its affirmation of
C) but rather it's affirmation in terms of
D) affirming rather
E) but rather that it affirms

"Rather than" is always better than "instead of".
But all answer choices except A, only provides rather... which i think is not correct so I go with choice A.


2)Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients' misconduct stemmed from a reaction to something ingested, but in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, the perpetrators are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions.
A) if criminal or delinquent behavior is attributed to an allergy to some food
B) in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food
C) in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy
D) if some food allergy is attributed as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior
E) in attributing a food allergy as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior

The correct idiom is Attribute to. that elimiantes D and E right away.
In choice A.. if clause is used for condition and it's like If X will happen, Y happens. so A is incorrect. and C is better than B.



3) The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
A) subscriptions and then took turns drawing
B) subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing
C) subscriptions, then taking turns drawing
D) subscriptions and then took turns, they drew
E) subscriptions and then drew, taking turns

The frist part of sentence is is past tense- members made monthly payement.... so the second part should be in past tense too- and then took turns... this eliminates B,C and E. D does not specify what the members took turns doing.and similarily E does not specify what the members drew.


4)An inventory equal to 90 days sales is as much as even the strongest businesses carry, and then only as a way to anticipate higher prices or ensure against shortages.
A) as much as even
B) even so much that
C) even as much that
D) so much as even
E) even so much as

As much as-the idiom is apt here.
So much as is considered idiomatic if it is preceded by a negative.
In choices C,D,E even is misplaced so that it no longer clearly modifies the storngest businesses. And, the use of that rather than as is unidiomatic in choices D and E.


5)A "calendar stick" carved centuries ago by the Winnebago tribe may provide the first evidence that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them on systematic astronomical observation.
A) of the development of advanced full-year calendars by North American Indians, basing them
B) that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them
C) of the North American Indians who have developed advanced full-year calendars and based them
D) that the North American Indians developed advanced full-year calendars based
E) of the North American Indians and their development of advanced full-year calendars based

The correct idiom is Based On. which elimiantes A,B and C.
Use of that is required here to provide information that is critical. in this ques to provide an evidence that the NA developed...


6) Minnesota is the only one of the contiguous forty-eight states that still has a sizable wolf population, and where this predator remains the archenemy of cattle and sheep.
A) where the population of wolves is still sizable;
B) where there is still a sizable population of wolves and where
C) that still has a sizable wolf population, and where
D) that still has a sizable population of wolves, and where
E) that still has a sizable wolf population, where

In C and D, the construction that still has...and where modifies Minnesota with clauses that are not grammatically parallel. In choice E, the omission of and illogically makes the where... clause modify wolf population rather than Minnesota--Choice A is grammatically constructed, but it lacks a conjunction that establishes a logical relation b/w the clauses. In B, the best choice parallel construction of where....and where... allows both clauses to modify Minnesota.


Regards,
Neha

Not very convincing as in xplanation is concerned..... 😞

Hey guys!

No more discussions from my side; I got done with my GMAT this weekend!

Got 720

Q - 50

V- 36 :banghead: but happy coz verbal has a nemesis for me thru out my mba journey(read cat,xat,iift,fms).. Thank God I dint have a bad day for once!

Thanks for the learning!

Regards!
Deepanshu

Hey guys!

No more discussions from my side; I got done with my GMAT this weekend!

Got 720

Q - 50

V- 36 :banghead: but happy coz verbal has a nemesis for me thru out my mba journey(read cat,xat,iift,fms).. Thank God I dint have a bad day for once!

Thanks for the learning!

Regards!
Deepanshu

Wow! thats great... Congraqts buddy... waiting for your detailed post/thread...
you can also give me some tips for this issue ---> http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/gmat-and-related-discussions/29450-low-gmat-scores-find-help-54.html#post1705380 😞
Wow! thats great... Congraqts buddy... waiting for your detailed post/thread...
you can also give me some tips for this issue ---> http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/gmat-and-related-discussions/29450-low-gmat-scores-find-help-54.html#post1705380 :-(


Hey!

Thanks!!!

Not that great since I belong to the coveted IIM fraternity:biggrin:, but still a face showing one! :)

replied to ur post in the same thread!

Read this thread religiously esp the pages 425 - 525(discussions among amsey,vikram,bizzarenym,ponds_ggn and a few others)

Regards!