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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 09:58 AM

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1. a “calendar stick” carved centuries ago by the winnebago tribe may provide the first evidence that the north american indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them on systematic astronomical observation.
(e) that the north american indians developed advanced full-year calendars based

2. You would have scored good marks if you had worked little harder.

(d) if you had worked a little harder

3. Some bat caves, like honeybee hives, have residents that take on different duties such as defending the entrance, acting as sentinels and to sound a warning at the approach of danger, and scouting outside the cave for new food and roosting sites.
(b) acting as sentinels and sounding


4.. The only way for growers to salvage frozen citrus is to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns.
(a) to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
1. E
2. D
3. B
4. A

3 out of 4 correct..1 still wrong.. Lemme see why it sud be (e) and not (a)...

(e) says..
"to have it quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns and rots the fruit "

now here "it"(the third word) represents the "fruit" na?(last word of the sentence)
adig...please clarify

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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 12:59 PM

Crush this....

Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.

(A) that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated
(B) to recognize and treat their symptoms
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated
(D) of recognizing and treating symptoms
(E) of getting his or her symptoms recognized and treated


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 02:13 PM

Break this...

In several cities, the government is going ahead with ambitious construction projects despite the high office-vacancy rates in those cities. The vacant offices, though available for leasing, unfortunately do not meet the requirements for the facilities needed, such as court houses and laboratories. The government, therefore, is not guilty of any fiscal wastefulness.


Which of the following is an assumption on which the argument above depends?


(A) Adaptation of vacant office space to meet the government’s requirements, if possible, would not make leasing such office space a more cost-effective alternative to new construction.

(B) The government prefers leasing facilities to owning them in cases where the two alternatives are equally cost-effective.

(C) If facilities available for leasing come very close to meeting the government’s requirements for facilities the government needs, the government can relax its own requirements slightly and consider those facilities in compliance.

(D) The government’s construction projects would not, on being completed, add to the stock of facilities available for leasing in the cities concerned.

(E) Before embarking on any major construction project, the government is required by law to establish beyond any reasonable doubt that there are no alternatives that are more cost-effective.


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 02:13 PM

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Crush this....

Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.


(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated



OA to follow.

feel free to post your vote & explanation
My take
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated

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Break this...

In several cities, the government is going ahead with ambitious construction projects despite the high office-vacancy rates in those cities. The vacant offices, though available for leasing, unfortunately do not meet the requirements for the facilities needed, such as court houses and laboratories. The government, therefore, is not guilty of any fiscal wastefulness.


Which of the following is an assumption on which the argument above depends?


(A) Adaptation of vacant office space to meet the government’s requirements, if possible, would not make leasing such office space a more cost-effective alternative to new construction.

(E) Before embarking on any major construction project, the government is required by law to establish beyond any reasonable doubt that there are no alternatives that are more cost-effective.
My take..

either (a) or (e)


better choice wud be (E) as it is must for the govt. to be sure of the fact that no other cost effective solns are available...as it is going ahead with construction..that has to be most cost effective option available...

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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 03:44 PM

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Crush this....

Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.

(A) that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated
(B) to recognize and treat their symptoms
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated
(D) of recognizing and treating symptoms
(E) of getting his or her symptoms recognized and treated


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My take
Option (C)

Reason-E comes close,but,survivors vs his/her is wrong.A begins with that,which is wrong.in B and D,they cannot treat their symptoms.


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 05:04 PM

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Crush this....

Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.

(A) that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated
(B) to recognize and treat their symptoms
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated
(D) of recognizing and treating symptoms
(E) of getting his or her symptoms recognized and treated


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"Chance of" is idiomatic

C/D/E remains.

D does not fit .
C is better than E......clear and concise.
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 05:09 PM

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My take
Option (C)

Reason-E comes close,but,survivors vs his/her is wrong.A begins with that,which is wrong.in B and D,they cannot treat their symptoms.
can you explain the blue ?
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 05:19 PM

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Break this...

In several cities, the government is going ahead with ambitious construction projects despite the high office-vacancy rates in those cities. The vacant offices, though available for leasing, unfortunately do not meet the requirements for the facilities needed, such as court houses and laboratories. The government, therefore, is not guilty of any fiscal wastefulness.


Which of the following is an assumption on which the argument above depends?


(A) Adaptation of vacant office space to meet the government’s requirements, if possible, would not make leasing such office space a more cost-effective alternative to new construction.

(B) The government prefers leasing facilities to owning them in cases where the two alternatives are equally cost-effective.

(C) If facilities available for leasing come very close to meeting the government’s requirements for facilities the government needs, the government can relax its own requirements slightly and consider those facilities in compliance.

(D) The government’s construction projects would not, on being completed, add to the stock of facilities available for leasing in the cities concerned.

(E) Before embarking on any major construction project, the government is required by law to establish beyond any reasonable doubt that there are no alternatives that are more cost-effective.


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tough one

given:
govt is constructing despite of high vacancy rates.
but,the vacant offices do not have adequate facilities.
hence,the govt's step is not wasteful.

now,the assumption is that,the vacant offices cannot be reconstructed at a lower cost.
i think,it should be option (A)


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 05:22 PM

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can you explain the blue ?
survivors is plural and so,his/her was not apt.

'to treat' means that,the survivors could treat themselves,which,i feel is wrong .


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 09 - 14-01-2009, 05:24 PM

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Break this...

In several cities, the government is going ahead with ambitious construction projects despite the high office-vacancy rates in those cities. The vacant offices, though available for leasing, unfortunately do not meet the requirements for the facilities needed, such as court houses and laboratories. The government, therefore, is not guilty of any fiscal wastefulness.


Which of the following is an assumption on which the argument above depends?


(A) Adaptation of vacant office space to meet the government’s requirements, if possible, would not make leasing such office space a more cost-effective alternative to new construction.

(B) The government prefers leasing facilities to owning them in cases where the two alternatives are equally cost-effective.

(C) If facilities available for leasing come very close to meeting the government’s requirements for facilities the government needs, the government can relax its own requirements slightly and consider those facilities in compliance.

(D) The government’s construction projects would not, on being completed, add to the stock of facilities available for leasing in the cities concerned.

(E) Before embarking on any major construction project, the government is required by law to establish beyond any reasonable doubt that there are no alternatives that are more cost-effective.


OA to follow.

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... OA is A


the goverment is going ahead with ambitious construction projects.

why ? is it a waste ? why they could not use the leasing facilities ?

(A) Adaptation of vacant office space to meet the government’s requirements, if possible, would not make leasing such office space a more cost-effective alternative to new construction.

thats the assumption
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