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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 30-07-2008, 11:47 PM

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My Take,

186. [E] "Motion to" is the correct Idiomatic expression.

187. [D] "as many as" is the correct idiomatic xpression,
E depicts the wrong meanings.

188. [E]

189. [D]
Understand X --> 'Like an expert' not Understand X --> as an expert does (what?)
E--> Parallelisms not maintained ;
iota .. i wanted ask u ..
187 D how can it be the answer
this is the sentence
In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many Americans were killed as would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during D-Day.
will be changed to ...
In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many more Americans were killed as there
would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during
D-Day.

more is redundant.. here

about 189.. D uses would.. which changes the meaning of the sentences..


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 31-07-2008, 05:08 AM

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piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96

186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

187. In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many Americans were killed as would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during D-Day.
(A) Americans were killed as
(B) Americans were killed than
(C) Americans were killed than those who
(D) more Americans were killed as there
(E) more Americans were killed as those who

188. As a result of medical advances, many people that might at one time have died as children of such infections as diphtheria, pneumonia, or rheumatic fever now live well into old age.
(A) that might at one time have died as children
(B) who might once have died in childhood
(C) that as children might once have died
(D) who in childhood might have at one time died
(E) who, when they were children, might at one time have died

189. Proponents of artificial intelligence say they will be able to make computers that can understand English and other human languages, recognize objects, and reason as an expert does-computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these.
(A) as an expert does--computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these
(B) as an expert does, which may be used for purposes such as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan
(C) like an expert--computers that will be used for such purposes as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan
(D) like an expert, the use of which would be for purposes like the diagnosis of equipment breakdowns or the decision whether or not a loan should be authorized
(E) like an expert, to be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan or not, or the like
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 31-07-2008, 05:32 AM

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iota .. i wanted ask u ..
187 D how can it be the answer
this is the sentence
In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many Americans were killed as would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during D-Day.
will be changed to ...
In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many more Americans were killed as there
would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during
D-Day.

more is redundant.. here

about 189.. D uses would.. which changes the meaning of the sentences..
though I am not sure, I think we can use "Many More" and whc is not redundant. I actually did a google for sentences with 'many more' and got some. but here "four times" & "more" seems redundant.So not sure about it.
the reason y i went with the option D is because of the idiomatic xpression "as many as" and in A 'there' is missing which is making the sentence wrong.
anyway gud point dude. We can discuss it ahead.

Also for 189 -- i am not able to decipher hw it is changing the meaning (may be due to hangover),can u be a bit elaborative?
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Re: piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96 - 31-07-2008, 11:27 AM

My take:
186.
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

187.
(C) Americans were killed than those who

(the use of "as" says it is not a comparitive degree. "more" and "than" should either come together or should not come at all )

188. As a result of medical advances, many people that might at one time have died as children of such infections as diphtheria, pneumonia, or rheumatic fever now live well into old age.
(B) who might once have died in childhood

(We always use "who" for the people)

189. (B) as an expert does, which may be used for purposes such as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan

(taking into considerstion parallelism etc)


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 31-07-2008, 01:15 PM

My Take


Q186 B
Q187 C
Q188 B
Q189 B
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Re: piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96 - 31-07-2008, 01:57 PM

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My take:
186.
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

187.
(C) Americans were killed than those who

(the use of "as" says it is not a comparitive degree. "more" and "than" should either come together or should not come at all )

188. As a result of medical advances, many people that might at one time have died as children of such infections as diphtheria, pneumonia, or rheumatic fever now live well into old age.
(B) who might once have died in childhood

(We always use "who" for the people)

189. (B) as an expert does, which may be used for purposes such as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan

(taking into considerstion parallelism etc)
again

Proponents of artificial intelligence say they will be able to make computers that can understand English and other human languages, recognize objects, and reason as an expert does-computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these.

medulla .. check the strength of will..

you are referring to
as an expert does, which may be used for purposes such as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan

will ko may bana diya.. very bad..

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the original sentence uses will .. and u have used would.. it changes the meaning..




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Re: piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96 - 31-07-2008, 02:07 PM

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186.E 187B 188B 189E
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 31-07-2008, 02:20 PM

186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to

187. In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many Americans were killed as would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during D-Day.
(A) Americans were killed as
(B) Americans were killed than
(C) Americans were killed than those who
(D) more Americans were killed as there
(E) more Americans were killed as those who

188. As a result of medical advances, many people that might at one time have died as children of such infections as diphtheria, pneumonia, or rheumatic fever now live well into old age.
(A) that might at one time have died as children
(B) who might once have died in childhood
(C) that as children might once have died
(D) who in childhood might have at one time died
(E) who, when they were children, might at one time have died

189. Proponents of artificial intelligence say they will be able to make computers that can understand English and other human languages, recognize objects, and reason as an expert does-computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these.
(A) as an expert does--computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these
(B) as an expert does, which may be used for purposes such as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan
(C) like an expert--computers that will be used for such purposes as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan
(D) like an expert, the use of which would be for purposes like the diagnosis of equipment breakdowns or the decision whether or not a loan should be authorized
(E) like an expert, to be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan or not, or the like
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 31-07-2008, 02:38 PM

Re: piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96

186.E
187.A
188.B
189.C
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 31-07-2008, 03:00 PM

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piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96
186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
piscean84-SC1-30/7/08-pg96

My take:
186. E
187. E
188. B
189. C :confused:
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