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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 08:52 AM

  1. D. including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
  2. E. include melting of the polar ice caps and a rise in sea level
  3. A. Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were relatively simple and static
  4. D. more fuel-efficient small cars than those at any other time in their
  5. D. those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well
  6. A. Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 09:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Cakofonixx... View Post
Sorry for Spamming but less discuss these as well as I was a bit confused in these.
Try to post a breif expaination of "why" between the close choices.

1.A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
  1. A. which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
  1. B. which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
  2. C. which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
  3. D. including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
My Take

1)D
2)E
3)D
4)C
5)D
6)D
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 09:41 AM

Hello Puys,

Answers to yesterdays Set.

41. E
42. C
43. A
44. E
45. C

Kudos to milind and cakefonixx for getting a prefect score.

Explanations for the above answers.

Answer to Question 41
Choices A, B, C, and D contain tense errors (the use of was never applied with has been required in A, for example), unidiomatic expressions (call... for considering), and uses of a pronoun (it) with no noun referent.By introducing the subordinating conjunction whereby, C and D produce sentence fragments. Only E, the best choice, corrects all of these problems. The predicate has never been applied refers to a span of time, from the
writing of the Constitution to the present, rather than to a past event (as was does), and the phrase is required indicates that the provision still applies. The phrase call... to consider is idiomatic, and to do so can substitute grammatically for it.

Answer to Question 42
Choice C is best because its phrasing is parallel and concise. A, D, and E begin with unnecessarily wordy phrases. Choice C also uses the idiomatic expression worried about rather than worried over (as in A) or worrying over (as in B); worried about is preferable when describing a condition rather than an action. Whereas C uses compact and parallel noun phrases such as the removal... and the failure ... , the other
choices employ phrases that are wordy, awkward, or nonparallel. D is also flawed in that the plural pronoun they does not agree with the singular noun administration.

Answer to Question 43
Choice A is best, for A alone makes clear that the land now known as Australia was considered the antipodes before it was developed. In B, it has no logical referent, because the previous clause describes a time when there was no Australia. Nor does it have a referent in C: substituting Australia for it produces a nonsensical statement. D is wordy, with the unnecessary what was, and imprecise in suggesting that Australia was
considered the antipodes after it became Australia. E similarly distorts the original meaning, and the past perfect had been is inconsistent with the past tense used to establish a time frame for the rest of the sentence.

Answer to Question 44
Choice A presents a dangling modifier. The phrase beginning the sentence has no noun that it can logically modify and hence cannot fit anywhere in the sentence and make sense. Coming first, it modifies heartbeats, the nearest free noun in the main clause; that is, choice A says that the heartbeats are using the Doppler ultrasound
device. Choice B contains the same main clause and dangling modifier, now at the end. Contrary to intent, the wording in choice C suggests that physicians can use a Doppler ultrasound device after they detect fetal heartbeats. In choice D the phrase using ... device should follow physician, the noun it modifies. Choice E is best.


Answer to Question 45
Grammatically, the participial phrase beginning delighted must modify the subject of the main clause. Because it is the manager who was delighted, choice C, in which the company manager appears as the subject, is the best answer. Choices A, B, D, and E create illogical statements by using it, the decision, the staff, and a raise,
respectively, as the sentence subject. Use of the passive voice in A, D, and E produces unnecessary wordiness,
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 09:48 AM

Hello,

Todays Set.

46.
A study commissioned by the Department of Agriculture showed that if calves exercise and associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do those raised in confinement.
(A) associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do
(B) associated with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight quicker than
(C) associate with other calves, they required less medication and will gain weight quicker than do
(D) associate with other calves, they have required less medication and will gain weight more quickly than do
(E) associate with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight more quickly than

47. Displays of the aurora borealis, or "northern lights," can heat the atmosphere over the arctic enough to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce electric currents that can cause blackouts in some areas and corrosion in north-south pipelines.

(A) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce
(B) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected, induce
(C) that it affects the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induces
(D) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected and induces
(E) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles and induce

48. The golden crab of the Gulf of Mexico has not been fished commercially in great numbers, primarily on account of living at great depths-- 2,500 to 3,000 feet down.

(A) on account of living
(B) on account of their living
(C) because it lives
(D) because of living
(E) being they live

49. The cameras of the Voyager II spacecraft detected six small, previously unseen moons circling Uranus, which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting the distant planet

(A) which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting
(B) doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known to orbit
(C) which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known in orbit around
(D) doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting
(E) which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known that orbit

50. As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500. or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.

(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would
deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.

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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 10:02 AM

took 5 mins..

46(E)
47(A)
48(B)
49(D)
50(B)


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 10:02 AM

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Todays Set.

46.
A study commissioned by the Department of Agriculture showed that if calves exercise and associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do those raised in confinement.
(A) associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do
(B) associated with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight quicker than
(C) associate with other calves, they required less medication and will gain weight quicker than do
(D) associate with other calves, they have required less medication and will gain weight more quickly than do
(E) associate with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight more quickly than

46)E
47)E
4C
49)B
50)C
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 10:10 AM

46. (E) associate with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight more quickly than

47. (E) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles and induce

48. (C) because it lives

49.(B) doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known to orbit

50. (D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 10:26 AM

[quote=piscean84;1144679]Hello,

Todays Set.

46.
A study commissioned by the Department of Agriculture showed that if calves exercise and associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do those raised in .............


This is my take
46-E
47-E
48-C
49-B
50-D
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 10:49 AM

Hello,

1.A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.

My take on the above questions.

1. B
2. E
3. D
4. B
5. D
6. A
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 04-06-2008, 11:00 AM

[quote=piscean84;1144749]Hello,

1.A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, ...


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