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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 07-04-2008, 01:54 PM

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1. The Wallerstein study indicates that even after a decade young men and women still experience some of
the effects of .....
Answer to Question 1
Choice D is best. The phrasing a divorce that occurred when they were children correctly uses the relative
clause that occurred to modify a divorce and includes a pronoun and verb (they were) that refer
unambiguously to their antecedent, men and women. Choice A incorrectly introduces the when... phrase with
occurring, thus illogically making divorce the grammatical referent of when a child; furthermore, the singular
child does not agree with the plural men and women. B replaces child with children but otherwise fails to
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correct A's errors of structure and logic, and C corrects only the error created by occurring. Choice E includes
an incorrect verb tense (has occurred) and wrongly replaces when with as. Also, each was does not properly
refer to men and women.

Answer to Question 2
In choice C, the best answer, an area about the size of Colorado clearly describes a rough equivalence
between the area of Colorado and the area overseen by the companies. In A and B, the plural verb have does
not agree with the singular subject number. Choice A is also wordy, since that is can be deleted without loss of
clarity. The absence of an area in B and E impairs clarity: the phrase beginning with about must modify a noun
such as area that is logically equivalent to the number of acres given. In D and E up to is unidiomatic; the
correct expression is from x to y. In D, the size of Colorado's is unidiomatic, since of Colorado forms a
complete possessive.

Answer to Question 3
Because the verb phrases used to describe the bats' duties are governed by the phrase different duties such
as, they should each be expressed in the present participial (or "-ing") form to parallel defending and scouting.
Choices A, C, D, and E all violate parallelism by employing infinitives (to...) in place of participial phrases. In E
the singular sentinel is not consistent with residents, and the omission of and distorts the meaning of the
original. Only B, the best answer, preserves the sense of the original, uses the correct idiom, and observes the
parallelism required among and within the three main verb phrases.

Answer to Question 4
For parallelism, the linking verb is should link two infinitives: The only way to salvage ... is to process. Choice
A begins with an infinitive, but the plural pronouns them and they do not agree with the singular noun citrus.
Choices B, C, and D do not begin with an infinitive, and all present pronoun errors: the plural pronouns cannot
grammatically refer to citrus or fruit, nor can they refer to farmers without absurdity. The best choice, E, has
parallel infinitives and uses fruit to refer unambiguously to citrus. E also expresses the cause-and-effect
relationship between the return of warmer weather and the rotting of the fruit; A, C, and D merely describe these
events as contemporaneous.

Answer to Question 5
Choices A, C, and E do not state the comparison logically. The expression as old as indicates equality of age,
but the sentence indicates that the Brittany monuments predate the Mediterranean monuments by 2,000 years.
In B, the best choice, older than makes this point of comparison clear. B also correctly uses the adjective
supposed, rather than the adverb supposedly used in D and E, to modify the noun phrase Mediterranean
predecessors.


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 07-04-2008, 04:05 PM

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uses the adjective
supposed, rather than the adverb supposedly used in D and E, to modify the noun phrase Mediterranean
predecessors.
I thoght Mediterranean to ab an adjective...but u r telling the Mediterranean
predecessors as noun phrase......
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 07-04-2008, 06:56 PM

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I thoght Mediterranean to ab an adjective...but u r telling the Mediterranean
predecessors as noun phrase......
How come???
here "Mediterranean Predecessors" is a noun phrase rather than Mediterranean as Adj and Predecessor as Noun, just like good morning,Hand kerchief etc.
hope this suffice.


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 08-04-2008, 01:01 PM

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waise bhai jo apne answers diye hai...usme aisa lagta hai ki kisi book se ya IMS/TIME ki kisi se pura chaap liya hai...kyunki usme bhi aadhi baat samjh main aati hai like particlple phrases...phrases modifying...and all...
   
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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 08-04-2008, 04:05 PM

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waise bhai jo apne answers diye hai...usme aisa lagta hai ki kisi book se ya IMS/TIME ki kisi se pura chaap liya hai...kyunki usme bhi aadhi baat samjh main aati hai like particlple phrases...phrases modifying...and all...
yep - u r absolutely right, i got the question as well as the answer from one of the book available with me. etna fundu explanation obviously koi book se hi milegi .
come on vars.jat apun ke pass etna funda agar hota toh phir se billi ke piche nahi bhagte es saal
i thought to share smthing which i have with all,taki grp study se sab ke sath apna bhi bhala hoo jaye
cheers...
agar xplanation samajh mai nahi aa rahi hai toh put those forth in this thread-- thr shd be someone who can come up with proper xplanation.....


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 08-04-2008, 04:11 PM

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1. c
Choices a, b and e lack parallel structure; parallel nouns should be used: years, desire, and debut. Choice d unnecessarily changes the infinitive to become.

2. B
Choices a, c, and e imply that driving a car at any speed is speeding. Choice d is wrong, because the subjunctive mood is required in the if clause.


3. C
Choices a and b contain a faulty comparison. The computer is a modern machine, and so the word other must be included. In choices d and e, the word has is unnecessary and awkward.


4.B
Due to should not be used in place of the compound proposition because of. Choice c has an error in agreement between the singular verb ( was) and the compound subject ( technology and capital ). Choice d is wordy and awkward.
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explainations for number 2 and 3 is somewot not clear.neways in number three the ans is definitely B which includes the word motorist.there's another option which also has the word motorist but its grammatically not tht sound.now when we compare other 2 options it doesnt hav the word motorist.hence they r neglected.cuz when we ask who speeds up then the ans should be motorist.in the absence of motorist its like the govt speeding up the vehicles

now coming to NUM3.the ans is C and other is used cuz there are number of modern machines inlcuding computer


lyfe bcomes wot we make of it, and wot we make of lyfe dpends entirely on how we manage d ideas tht come to our brain

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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 09-04-2008, 11:33 PM

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3. The desktop computer has revolutionized office procedures more than any machine of modern times.

a. any machine
b. has any machine
c. any other machine
d. has any other machine
e. any other machine has
desktop computer also falls in the category of machine.So it has to be excluded from the group of machines and then compared, by using "any other machine", for example

Iron is more useful than any other metal.


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 16-04-2008, 12:21 PM

a sitter from me....... check it out....
"neither the students nor the teacher have came to school"



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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 16-04-2008, 02:23 PM

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a sitter from me....... check it out....
"neither the students nor the teacher have came to school"

neither the students nor the teacher have come to school


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Re: Sentence Correction for CAT 2008 - 16-04-2008, 05:41 PM

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neither the students nor the teacher have come to school
if we remove the have
neither the students nor the teacher came to school.isnt it correct???

neither the students nor the teacher attended the conference.is this also not correct??


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