[coolsurfer23in]

Originally Posted by MurTuzA

How abt playing Ghazal building on the line of story building.
We start with a couple of lines and anyone can add their next two lines to it.
Just a thought.

gr8 idea..lets do this.sounds excitng and fun

[morpheus4u]

MurTuzA wrote

Tu Nahi,Gham Nahi,Sharab Nahi.....
Tu Nahi,Gham Nahi,Sharab Nahi.....
Aisi Tanhayee ka jawab nahi.

kuchh aur sher is ghazal ke jo kaabil-e-taarif hain.....

Tum Nahi,Gham Nahi,Sharab Nahi.....
Aisi Tanhayee ka jawab nahi

jane kis kis ki maut ayi hai.....
aaj rukh par koi nakaab nahi...

"WOH KARAM UNGLIYON PAR GINTE HAIN....
ZULM KA JINKE KUCHH HISAAB NAHI"(awesome,isn't it)

manasee wrote:
Baat nikalegi to bohot door talak jayegi

lolz,manasee tumne to baat kuchh jyada hi door bhej di


and xcellent post by kuk-du-ku aka sayeisha
btw what does sayeisha means???????

[s_smile]

Originally Posted by MurTuzA

hey ppl,
Just a crazy thought....
How abt playing Ghazal building on the line of story building.
We start with a couple of lines and anyone can add their next two lines to it.
Just a thought.

had this in my mind too

plzz give me d privilege of startin wid mine
..i ve edited it..so tht even boyz can post further..

teri khusiyon ke liye har waqt khuda se fariyad karte hain,
tere ashkon ko apni ankhon mein lekar tujhe yaad karte hain...
har lamha tere deedar ki tamana ki par tu na aaya,
teri yaadon se hi roj mulaqat karte hain :!:


ps : shall we strt..m really witin for sum 1 to contiue it :P

[MurTuzA]

Originally Posted by s_smile

teri khusiyon ke liye har waqt khuda se fariyad karte hain,
tere ashkon ko apni ankhon mein lekar tujhe yaad karte hain...
har lamha tere deedar ki tamana ki par tu na aaya,
teri yaadon se hi roj mulaqat karte hain :!:

Tune gham bhaley hi kaii diye mujhko,
Teri khushiyon ki dua din raat karte hai.
Jo chand khushiyan khuda ne mere naseeb mein likhi thi,
Aaj tere naam hum apni woh jaaydaad likhte hai.

[coolsurfer23in]

Originally Posted by MurTuzA

Tune gham bhaley hi kaii diye mujhko,
Teri khushiyon ki dua din raat karte hai.
Jo chand khushiyan khuda ne mere naseeb mein likhi thi,
Aaj tere naam hum apni woh jaaydaad likhte hai.

yeh ashk kabhi dil mein toofan uthaenge
jo rooth gaye mujhse, voh laut bhi aayenge
hai khel muqdar ka bichodo ko milana bhi
aasan hai jalna bhi
aasan hai jaalana bhi.

[CA4IIMA]

Originally Posted by kuk-du-ku

Some information on jagjit singh. Some I knew and some I tried to find out:

* Jagjit Singh pioneered the ghazal wave in India in 1976
* his debut album "The Unforgettables" with his wife and his first song in this Album was " Baat Niklegi to Phir door talak jayegi "
* Jagjit Singh was born in Ganaganagar in Rajasthan on 8 Feb 1941
*"After receiving a B.A. Degree from D.A.V. College at the City of Jalandhar he came to Mumbai for a playback singing career and then the struggle began. He used to sing at different Marriage parties and functions at that time. During this struggle to survive in such a vast city he meet Chitra Singh; fell in love; and married her."<from a website>
*Jagjit Singh went through a painful time when he lost his only son, Vivek to a car accident. In one interview on a Canadian T.V. he mentioned that he could not have survived this pain if there was no music." 'Jag' ne cheena mujhse mujhe jo bhi laga payara....sab 'Jit' gaye mujhse main hardam hi hara", clearly shows the pain Jagjit Singh has encountered in his life. <from a webiste>
List of Jagjit Singhs' Albums.



I hope it answers some of the questions
sayeisha

Great Thread guys . .

Sayeisha thanks for the info , i was searching for it. Thanks a ton.

Great shaayari guys , u ppl are great shaayars, Ye sahi me aapki original creations hain kya ? hats off to u ..

Me too a die hard Jag Ji fan, m posting one of my fav here :

"khair mai pyaasaa rahaa, usne itnaa to kiyaa...
sookhi palkon ki kataaaron ko wo paani de gaya !!!"

Carry on guys , u r going great !

[morpheus4u]

jab baat ashqon,tanhayee,judai aur gham ki chal padi hai to jag ji ki gayee hui ek sundar ghazal jo kam hi logon ne suni hogi.....

meri tanhaiyon tum hi laga lo mujh ko seene se ,
ke mein ghabara gaya hun is tarah ro ro ke jene se.

yeh aadhi rat ko fir choodiyan si kya chanakti hain,
koi aata hai ya meri hi zanzeeren khanakti hain,
yeh kaisi aah si uthati hai khamoshi ke seene se,
ke mein ghabara gaya hun is tarah ro ro ke jeene se.

[s_smile]

Originally Posted by coolsurfer23in

yeh ashk kabhi dil mein toofan uthaenge
jo rooth gaye mujhse, voh laut bhi aayenge
hai khel muqdar ka bichodo ko milana bhi
aasan hai jalna bhi
aasan hai jaalana bhi.

abhi abhi khuda se teri shiqakat ki hai,
ke teri di hui tanhai tujhe bhi mile,
par hum to dard-e-mohabbat main bhi ji lenge,
teri khusiyon ki khatir apni har mannat tere naam karte hain :!:

shukriya
soni

[kuk-du-ku]

wah wah soni cool surfer and morpheus too good
some from me:

Jab chahat ki galiyon se guzar rahi thi,Unka haath thame chal rahi thi
Laga har mod pe ek fasana hai,Khush rehne ka bahana hai
Saath chhuta to ruswaiyon ki doli uthi,
dard mila chahat mein hamein ,tanhaiyan mili virasat mein
ashiq mana tha jisse humne woh bedard to ishq ke kabil na tha
mohobbat samjha tha jisse humne woh gham ke siva kuch aur na tha

sayeisha

[morpheus4u]

ok guys ..the new topic is ISHQ....
one of my fav on ishq is by meer..

ibtida-e-ishq hai,rota hai kya
"aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya"
(quite famous,isn't it..but few people know the beginning....)

another one...(also very famous)

kya ishq ne samjha hai,kya husn ne jaana hai..
hum khaa'knashin logon ki thoka'r me zamaana hai,

is ishq ko asaan na samjhna yaaron...
bas aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai...

lookin fwd to kkuk-du-ku,coolsurfer,smile,murtuza for some gr8 ones on ishq.....