[Manasee]

Another dard bhari gazal....have missed 2 lines in between...any1 remembers?



Baat nikalegi to bohot door talak jayegi
Log bewajaha udasi ka sabab poochenge
Ye bhi poochecnge ki tum itne pareshan kyun ho

Joodiyon pe bhi kain tanja kiye jayenge
kaapte haatho me fikre kase jayenge
log jaalim hai har ek baat ka taana denge
baato baaton me mera jikra bhi le aayenge
unki baaton ka jarasa bhi asar mat lena
varna chehere ke taason se samajh jayenge

chahe kuch bhi ho sawalaat na karna unse
mere baare mein koi baat na karna unse.....

baat nikalegi to phir door talak jayegi

[paranoid_here]

Originally Posted by kuk-du-ku

wah wah wah wah wah wah

kash tumahara awaz radio mirchi me aata

[s_smile]

Originally Posted by morpheus4u

"RAGO MEIN DAUDTE FIRNE KE HUM NAHI QAYAL,
JO AANKH SE NA TAPKA WOH LAHU KYA HAI"
(wah wah wah wah wha wha wha wah wah)
..

wah wah huzuur too gud...ghalib saheb ka to jawab nahi :!: ha:

Originally Posted by kuk-du-ku

wah wah wah wah wah wah

tarif ke liye shukriya mohtarma :P

sum of my fav gazals.

.seene main zalan aankhon main tuffan sa kyon hai,
is shahar main har shask pareshaan a kyon hai...(dnt rem d movie )

n the mind blowin gazal in d movie daddy

aaina mujh se meri pehli si surat mange ,
mere aape mere hoone ki nishani mange :!:

[shalin]

here is one of my fav Nazm:

tere khushbuu mein base Khat main jalaataa kaise
pyaar mein Duube huye Khat main jalaataa kaise
tere Khat aaj main gangaa me.n bahaa aayaa huu.N
aag bahate hue paanii mein lagaa aayaa huu.N

jin ko duniyaa kii nigaahon se chhupaaye rakhaa
jin ko ik umr kaleje se lagaaye rakhaa
diin jin ko, jinhe.n iimaan banaaye rakhaa

tune duniyaa kii nigaaho.n se jo bachkar likhe
saalahaa-saal mere naam baraabar likhe
kabhii din me.n to kabhii raat me.n uThakar likhe

pyaar mein Duube huye Khat mai.n jalaata kaise
tere haathon ke likhe Khat main jalaata kaise
tere Khat aaj main gangaa mein bahaa aayaa huu.N
aag bahate huye paannii mein lagaa aayaa huu.N

Cheers!

Shalin Jain

PS: my another fav is "Ab main raashan kii kataaroun mein nazar aataa houn" written by Khaleel Dhantejvi ... plenty more ofcourse!!

[shalin]

Originally Posted by Manasee

Another dard bhari gazal....have missed 2 lines in between...any1 remembers?

I'm adding the missing lines as well correcting few wrongly used words:

baat nikalegii to phir duur talak jaayegii
log bevajah udaasii kaa sabab puuchheinge
ye bhii puuchhenge ki tum itanii pareshaaN kyuuN ho

UngaliyaaN uThengii sukhe huye baaloun kii taraf
ik nazar dekhenge guzare huye saaloun kii taraf
chuDiyoun par bhii kaii tanz kiye jaayeinge
kaaNpate haathoun pe bhii fikre kase jaayenge

log zaalim hain har ik baat kaa taanaa denge
baatoun baatoun mein meraa zikr bhii le aayenge
unakii baatoun kaa zaraa saa bhii asar mat lenaa
varnaa chehare ke taasur se samajh jaayenge

chaahe kuchh bhii ho savaalaat na karanaa unase
mere baare mein koii baat na karanaa unase

baat nikalegii to phir duur talak jaayegii

Cheers,
Shalin Jain

[MurTuzA]

Another of my Fav Jagjit Ghazals is

Tu Nahi,Gham Nahi,Sharab Nahi.....
Tu Nahi,Gham Nahi,Sharab Nahi.....
Aisi Tanhayee ka jawab nahi.

Ppl who havent listened to it yet....do listen to it.I m sure u ppl will ove it.


This one from Chitra Singh is a true master piece.....

Safar mein dhoop to hogi jo chal sako to chalo......
Sabhi hai bheed mein tum bhi nikal sako to chalo.

I m sure every person can relate to this song in today's world of cut throat competition and sinking levels of compassion.

[ashukohli]

just read this somewhere touched me...

Har Subah ki dhund kuch yaad dilati hai
Har phool ki khusbu ek jaadu jagati hai,
chaho na chaho kitna bhi magar aapki yaad aa hi jaati hai...

[coolsurfer23in]

arz kiya hai


Yaad karta hain aapko tanhai mein
dil dooba hain ghamo ki gehrai mein,
humein mat dhoondo duniya ke bheed mein,
hum to milenge aapko aapki parchhai mein




kuch nasha apki baton ka hai,
kuch nasha dheemi barsat ka hai,
hamne aap yunhi sharabi math kahiyae
yeh dil par asar apkae mulaqat ka hai!!


gr8 to see this threa alive and kickin..keep posting guys!!!


ciao

[saur_abh21]

My fav. of ghulam ali

1)ye dil ye pagal dil mera
kyun bujh gaya AAWARGI

2)chupke chupke

3)yeh baatein jhoothi baatein hain
yeh logon ne failaiyi hain

and of jagjit singh

1) ek jaam me gire hain
kuch log ladkhada ke

2) kal chaudhvi ki raat thi

chitra singh

mujhse milne ke vo karta
tha bahane kitne

aur end mein ek Sher!!!

Jab bhi hum udhar se gujarte hain
woh parda taan lete hain
shukra hai khuda ka
is bahane pehchaan to lete hain.

[MurTuzA]

hey ppl,
Just a crazy thought....
How abt playing Ghazal building on the line of story building.
We start with a couple of lines and anyone can add their next two lines to it.
Just a thought.