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19-08-2009, 01:32 AM
i can surely rate this poem as one of the best poem i have written.i guess there is no need to explain the situation of the poem..
FALLING LEAVES
I was thinking of old friends today
And how many of them have slipped away,
Moved, got occupied, or stopped calling so much,
Found new friends, got busy, and lost touch.
It reminded me of falling leaves.
Every autumn the leaves fall from the trees
Some stay longer than the others,
But eventually – each leaf must fall, I am told,
Leaving the tree alone to face the cold
Why is it that in the time of utmost need
The leaves would seek to leave the tree?
And when we need our friends around
We look and they cannot be found?
Of course these friendships come and go
And in the spring new leaves will grow.
But I prefer autumn friends of old
With crackling laughter and color bold.
It saddens me now I must admit
How somehow, someway,
I forgot laughing with old friends of mine
During summers when the sun would shine
And then I thought of you
That one stubborn leaf that won’t let go
That clings despite the winds that blow
Fighting ice, and snow, and winter’s stings
Hanging on right through till spring
So I guess that’s what you are to me now –
The very last leaf to leave the tree.
I know it seems silly, but it’s true.
When I see that last leaf….
I think of you…
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20-08-2009, 12:21 AM
Death Awaits
Your habit was for fun, so cool it seemed.
All your friends did it, so hip was it deemed!
You found yourself at the top of the world
Only when it was between your lips, so curled!
You loved the smoke, envied the spirals,
You paid no heed to the upcoming virals,
Your eyes so glazed, with a mirage of pleasure.
too blind to see your bleeding loss of treasure!
Your good times were soon getting fewer and fewer
Your got dark circles; Your food tasted like sewer,
Your life was controlled by the devil of smoke
your lungs were now screaming, coughing from the choke
Your "Pack-a-day" turned to "Packets-per-hour",
Your filter-paper rolls, now had all your power,
Your life now consisted of only butt ends
Your body, an ashtray; Nothing left to mend

Now you look at me, morose on your deathbed
you flinch at my hard words, at every word I just said,
They say you wont live to see another morning,
Too bad, you missed out on the "STATUTORY WARNING"!

QUIT SMOKING
There are Better Ways To Kill Yourself!!
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20-08-2009, 12:36 AM
I need a shoulder……………
It is not that I am very weak
It is not that I am very strong
It is not that I am lacking courage
It is not that I am unable to do anything or everything myself
But I need a shoulder………..
It is not that I don’t have friends
It is not that I don’t have support
It is not that I don’t trust anyone
It is not that I don’t rely on any one
But I need a shoulder…………
It is not that no one listens to me
It is not that no one pays attention to me
It is not that I can’t have confidence on anyone
It is not that I can’t handle any problems
But I need a shoulder………….
It is not that I am in trouble
It is not that I am a big failure
It is not that I am a big success
It is not that I am suffering
But I need a shoulder…………..
It is not that I have no one to talk to
It is not that I can’t express myself
It is not that I don’t have anyone to communicate my problems
It is not that I am broken
But I need a shoulder……………
It is not that I can’t make my point clear
It is not that I can’t take an individual stand of myself
It is not that I can’t take my decisions
It is not that I can’t make things work my way
But I need a shoulder…………….
It is not that I don’t have a spirit
It is not that I don’t have happiness
It is not that I don’t have sadness
It is not that I don’t have satisfaction
But I need a shoulder…………….
It is not that I have not seen anything
It is not that I have not been through anything
It is not that I have not done anything
It is not that I have not experienced anything
But I need a shoulder…………….
It is not that I have been dishonest
It is not that I have been a liar
It is not that I have been a cheat
It is not that I have been bad at anytime
But I need a shoulder………………
It is not that I am proud
It is not that I am insolent
It is not that I am outrageous
It is not that I am extraordinary
But I need a shoulder……………….
I need a shoulder………….. I need you
I need it to anguish in pain
I need it to repent in mistakes
I need it to confess in guilt
I need it to cry in silence
I need it to laugh in fun
I need it to smile in gladness
I need it to celebrate in joy
I need it to feel wanted at all times
I need a shoulder………….to share……
Because it is not that I can’t accept facts…….
I need a shoulder………….. I need you
I need love and my love is you
I need peace and my peace is you
I need to glide over sadness and joy alike, just with you
I need you b’coz I feel incomplete without you
I need a shoulder…………..which is you
I just want to sit and stare at you
I just want to swim in your eyes
I just want to keep my head in your lap
I just want to hold your hand
I just to want to have you around
And I don’t want a conversation
I just want to cry in front of you
B’coz I'm in Love with you
I need a shoulder…………..which is you
Love is treasure, my jewel you are
Love is feeling, my thought you are
Love is light, my eyes you are
Love is fire, my desire you are
Love is endless, my sea you are
Love is boundless, my air you are
Love is indestructible, my spirit you are
Love is innocent, and that you are
I need a shoulder………….. I need you
I need love and my love is you
Beautiful girl………..stay with me………
It is, that this is a fact
It is, that I love only you…………………
©Archit ™Creations of an unstable mind_M Lo&Ro Crtnzzzz……….
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01-09-2009, 10:40 PM
Of anything i have ever written i love this piece the most 
Missing You
Here goes another day, Here comes another night,
But its still the same, You are still out of my sight
Oh I would luv to tell u, how much i miss u,
I want to hold u in my armz n i want to kiss u
I dream of u every night, wishing for u to be near,
I wake up every morning, looking for u everywhere
I goof around with one vivid picture in my mind,
And its u dear, No one has ever and can never be so kind
And then u call me, U could have had a look at my face,
After talking to u for a while, i felt like being in ur embrace
To spend a day with u, i can wait for years,
But the end of that day can bring me to tears
The way u look at me connotes how much u luv me,
Its seems the same as i have wanted it to be
The luv that we share, i wish it continues to shine,
Oh baby I have everything with me as long as u r mine
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01-09-2009, 10:49 PM
Dont give up ! you can do it !
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01-09-2009, 10:51 PM
HEY..dis one's mine...
door tha mai apni duniya me anjana,
har sitam har gum se begana.....
karna chahta tha mai sagar ko par,
par tumne bana dia mujhe is dariya ka shikaar....
fir bhi hai mujhe ye aitbaar,
ki ek din mai karunga is dariya ko bhi paar....
par mujhe rahega us din ka intezaar,
jab mai honga saagar k us paar..
Underdogs give a reason to dream...and dreams give a reason to live....
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03-09-2009, 11:53 AM
A FIGHT OF A LIFETIME....
When there is a will,
when there is a fight,
when there is a reason,
when there is a fire,
when there are hills to climb onto,oceans to dive into,
when you run to catch your dreams,
when u do everything for a single cause,
when u understand the difference between a win and a loss,
when u push your fist in the air to celebrate,
when u do not realise what wearyness is,
When you are desperate to achieve,
when u are crazzy,insane and do not bother to be dirty,
when u understand winning is not an end but means,
when u r exhausted and lie on the ground,
when u got nothing more left within to put into,
when every drop of sweat symolizes pride,
Then comes the salvation,
then u know it all,
then the wins dont oversmart you ,
then the losses dont defeat you ,
then the effort is the master,
then are the things beyond wins and losses,
then u know the value of this life...
then comes the transformation, from a kid to a man,
then wat happens is the life,
in the biggest of it's strides....
Underdogs give a reason to dream...and dreams give a reason to live....
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03-09-2009, 11:11 PM
Hi
New visitor...
I am inspired to send out one of my poems...
But not right now...
Hey, naga25French.... Cool poems... especially the Falling Leaves!!!
Hear from you soon...
Till then...
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07-09-2009, 10:58 PM
hi
as promised I am back! Well, so, with a thudding heart, I post my first ever online poem... Here goes...
Unanswered questions that swim in empty eyes,
An urgency fills the air, yet I float above,
Disoriented, disembodied
There will be many who shall question my conduct
And I will have to reply- with much credibility
But not right now
This time I have begged off time itself
And it is fast running out
In fact, this moment of abandonment is my last chance
For tomorrow
I will stand
To be questioned
To be intimidated by sophisticated lawyers;
Such is my destiny
And perhaps I should be biting nails
Or something...
Yet, right now I float
In some crazy euphoria
You might suspect me of being on 'drugs'
Or a shot of adrenaline,
God knows...
You think I give a ****
Call me mad, or call me brave or just some wannabe
Or maybe I am all of them
I don't pretend to know
But, this I promise you
When I come down, or when I am forced down
I will describe you the feel of wind caressing my skin
And the shapes of clouds across the mountains
I'll teach you the language of the wings of the eagle
And secrets of departed dreams...
I'll try to fill those empty eyes
With the visions I gather in mine
And perhaps bring smiles on the faces
Of the two kids that play
Amongst the mounds of garbage,
Scavenging for the crumbs of a week old burger
Perhaps my flight will give them
Some thing aside of hunger
And when you shall see me talk to them
You'll concoct adjectives...
Pointless, it will be
Your applause and outrage aside
While I float above, can you pass a piece of your lunch
To those ragamuffins?
I can fill their eyes, but will you fill those stomach
And what about the heart?
Their's and your's?
Both are empty
Both yearn for love!
So, will you?
Tell me, when I am yanked back...
Hey, I live in Kathmandu and there is this wonderful section of the city, a fav haunt of the hippies... Where I saw two hungry boys...
Plz, after you've paid for some foodstuff and can't eat them all, plz plz plz pack the leftovers and give them to some hungry kid... The gratitude in their eyes will fill your soul for days to come...
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27-09-2009, 06:54 AM
another day
The clouds pass 'by'
I sit
I dream
The days turn 'why'
I wish
I cry
The songs turn 'lie'
I nod
I whine
The cause turns 'mime'
The end I try
none comes 'high'
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