Poems, plays, skits -- Share Here !!

[chango]

This thread is to share our feelings through creative work ..... particularly through


~ poems
~ prose
~ plays
~ skits
~ dohas
~ kaviitayein
~ rachnayein



This is not like the Limerick thread ..... please abstain from posting 'useless' 1 or 2 liners...... a proper flow of creative work wud be highly appreciated .....

One can also post other's creations but do mention the writer/author .....





Aaj kai dino baad uthai hain kalam..
ho gaya hain waqt dardo pe lagane ka marham..
aaj fir jaagi hain soi chah !... hain !! kho na du main sharam..
aaj kai dino baad uthai hain kalam.

~~Chango

[chango]

posting the first one ...... let it flow ~!!



Hindu - Muslim -- Kasaai Kasaai

ya allah !! hey ishwar
kya tum dono bhi yu hi ladte ho upar ?
kya tumhare log bhi pyase hain khoon ke ?
ya bhai chara hain unme waha upar ??

Agar samay mile toh,
zara dekho prithvi ki aur
apni raas-leela aur begamo ke bandhan ko tod
zara dekho prithvi ki aur

Har taraf hahakar mach raha,
chaaro taraf khoon beh raha.
jangli kutto ki tareh sab lad rahe hain
neta laal rang ki holi khel rahe hain.

Dharm ke naam par naastik kaat rahe hain,
gali gali, shahar nagar khoon baat rahe hain.

Geeta ki izzat lut rahi,
kuran ke panne phat rahe,
manushya aadamkhor ho gaya hain
raajneeti ki gufaoon main kho gaya hain.

Kaun aayega yeh laal rang ko dhone ?
kya aayega koi is maar kaat ko rokne ?

Kapde phat rahe, khoon beh raha
ablaayein ro rahi, dusht has raha.

Baap unko kandha de rahe
jo dhoodh ka karz naa chuka sake.
Biwiyan vidhva ho gayee
pati - parmeshwar ke chitaayon pe so gayee.
Bachhe yateem ho gaye hain,
desh apaahiz ho gaya...
Hindu muslim lad rahe
sansaar humpar has raha .....

Arre buddhi heen , O ram aur rahim
ab bhi waqt hain, sambhal jao
in netaayon ki baaton main naa aao..
Yeh toh kursi ke bhookhe hain saale
lok shakti ke naam par dhabbe hain kaale ...

Agar tum dekh rahe ho
ae khuda, hey prabhu
toh mujhko batao
kab bhejoge tum maseeha ?
kab band hongi yeh ladayiaan
kya desh yuhi jalta rahega ?
kya yu hi khoon, gheen banta rahega ??

Ab toh hum par daya kar...
apne bacchon ko dono haatho se pakar
kar humpar ehsaan ek naya Bharat rach kar.

Kya bhool gaya tu ki hain hum Manu ki santanein
aakhir hain hum aman aur shaanti ke deewanein
maana ki baaton mein aakar beh jaate hein saare
par dil aur khayal saaf hain humare.

Bahut dekh li tune laal rang ki holi
dekh ganga bhi laal saari hain auri
ab toh humpar daya kar
jo hua uske liye maaf kar
mauka de basane ka fir se ek pyara sa ghar
ab toh humpar daya kar .

Kya nahi basa sakte hum ek pyara saa shahar
jaha bahe ek shaant lehar
jise paar kare roz Ram aur Rahim
ek duje ka haath pakad ???


~~~ Chango

[cracked-it]

Here is one composed during my teen days (these days its mostly instant poems)

Deep thy words
Touching my heart
I wonder how you
Within seconds part

Neither meaningful
Nor meaningless
Should I?
But I confess

Its my fault
Forbid me not

[chango]

Feeling down ?? .... grimacing in pain .... bouts of self-doubt ????

Go ahead and read one of the most inspirational poems ever written ...... will instill a stronger will and shall push you to Hold On !!!!


~~My personal Dedication to Consti~~


'if'

IF you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too;
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or being lied about, don't deal in lies,
Or being hated, don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise:


If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;
If you can think - and not make thoughts your aim;
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same;
If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools:


If you can make one heap of all your winnings
And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings
And never breathe a word about your loss;
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone,
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!'


If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
' Or walk with Kings - nor lose the common touch,
if neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
If all men count with you, but none too much;
If you can fill the unforgiving minute
With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
And - which is more - you'll be a Man, my son!


Rudyard Kipling (1865-1936)

[vineet.nitd]

With due regard to the air of inspiration and aspiration around... i woluld like to put one composition which was made when i was in my college final year ...

----aashayen---

Jeevan ke kisi mod par...

Har prant me har chchor par,

Ek balak ko padta hai sunna,

sun o chchotu sun o munna.

hum aur papa chahe jitna kasht uthaenge

tumhare upar fir bhi ek aanch na aane dengey...

Badle me bas itnaa karna,

kuchch apney jeevan me bannaa.

Jwaar ye aashaon ka baalak man me utsah jagaata

nadan dil fir aksar kal ke sundar sapney sanjota.

Kaal chakra ab baalak ko yuvak me badalti

laga yun ki jaise mandhar ho chali thi uski gatee..

saamna kartey hue is jeevan ki harek jung

utarta gaya dheere dheere sapno ka sunahraa rang...

Maa ki kahi wo baatein aaj fir yaad aati hain...

par is baar utsaah nahi...nirashaa ka bhav jagaati hain..

Par bhale ab jeevan ka har swarth churn ho.

koshish yahi hogi ki maa ki aashayen poorn ho......



regards ,
Vineet

[chango]

Originally Posted by vineet.nitd

----aashayen---

Jeevan ke kisi mod par...

Har prant me har chchor par


regards ,
Vineet

Vineet really gud to see a post frm u and that also on ths thread .... Welcome Back .....

Just thought of writing sumthng as a reply to ur post ......



Re: aashayen


jin baaton ko yaad kar hote ho tum niraash

jin yaadon ko yaad kar kehte ho tum "kaash...."

unhi baaton ko yaad kar dost, na ho tu is choti si haar se hataash

jin baaton ko yaad kar hote ho tum niraash



jeevan ke rang toh har pal hain chadte utarte

kya holi ke rango se nahi har saal ho tum khelte ?

rang toh bas swapn matra hain, kuch jamte aur kuch bikharte

ek sapna agar toot gaya toh kya nahi souge tum aaj raat dekhne naye sapne ??


dekho ye bikhre rango ne bhi chadaya hain ek naya rang....

utaawla ho raha hain khelne holi yeh naya rang aaj tumhare sang ......



~~ Chango

[vineet.nitd]

This one composed back while leaving college ... but how truly it reflects my present self in this very moment yet again and along with me many others ....

Dedicated To Pg Junta

----commence again----

Yet another chapter of life is near finish....

Yes ,it seemed long and tiring at start

But today i cant believe that these are the final pages
i am going to part..

Yet another bunch of memories to add and many lovely merits to cherish

Yet another boat to sail ahead..while the old one is going to perish..

Many old doubts got cleared, many new theories learnt...

Many contradictions surfaced , many conceptions burnt...

This lesson revealed the naked human so selfish and mean

Also it showed a few faces ...where veracity is clearly seen..

This period helped all sorts of experiences to acrue..

At least now there are lesser facts which might be painfully true..

Yet again i am in a strange mental state

These last moments are making my thoughts bifurcate...

The future is uncertain ..the present known

Its hard to smile at welcome , bidding farewell to something my very own...

I am afraid i haven't left anything behind hurriedly

The expected end really has come rather too unexpectedly..

This material world , however , has no room for feeling

Confined in past thoughts , one can never touch the ceiling..

Our sole duty is to move ahead the way,

things good or bad are always there to stay..

When we weep , it gives us smile

When we are decieved , it makes us agile

It's the time that teaches us how to move forward

U will be a loser if u look back even for a while !

[Neelabh Verma]

well wrote this blank verse for my blog...thought ...cud share it here as well...


Use Me


Use me
Make me a ladder
Climb you way to success.
Use me
As a stepping stone
And move on the road ahead.
Use me
Gimme your grief
Take away my happiness.
Use me
And I won’t complain.
I am used to being used,
Used to being abused.
I feel best when alone,
When surrounded by people,
Everyone itches to extract a pound of flesh…
…Closest to my heart.
I have nothing to lose now though,
Lost everything long back.
Whatever is now left of me
Is God’s providence for thee.
Use me.


Neelabh

[Zarine]

What happened to the "Creative Corner" thread??

Ps:- Thoda ol days ke daure padh rahe hain..pls bear

[chango]

The one closest to my heart ....


Maa (mother)


Naa jaane kyu aaj dil ne kaha
"likho kuch maa ke baare main
samjho arth is adbudh shabd ka
jaan lo hain yeh daya ka matka
hain amrit phal chupa jiske kan - kan main
likho kuch maa ke baare main."

Maa kya hain ??
likhne main toh bas chandra bindu aur maatra hain yeh
par asal main ek prem mayee sindhu ki yaatra hain yeh.

Mamta ki moorat hain woh
saahas ki surat hain woh
sahi maane main khubsurat hain woh.

Hain kisi main saahas naun mahino ke tarpan sehne ka ?
hain koi aur layak jeevan ke darpan banne ka ??
Uske ek spandan se rongte khare ho jaye ...
uske ek ruudan se mann machlit ho jaye.
Hain aisi jeev jo khud pyaasi rahe par bacchon ko pilayein
hain aise baawli jo khud bhookhi rahe par doosro ko khilayein....
Bacchon ko khub yatn kar woh nehlayein
aur rone par aap hi sehlayein.

Aisi hain yeh maa
mamta ki murti hain jo
jeevan ki khoobsurti hain jo ....

Batana chahta hu main sabko aaj
ki chaaro dishaayon main hain uska hi raaz
hain usi se geetha granth aur namaaz
Mujhko uspar hain poora naaz.

Har insan ke tarakki ke peeche hota hain isi maa ka haath
har mushkil ka samadhaan milta hain, bas chahiye maa ka saath.

Maa hain meri saans
main hu uska daas
aaj hain kitni door woh
par fir bhi kitni paas
kyoki aakhir main woh hain meri saans
aur main uska nirdhan naalayak daas

Maa hi toh sahi path dikhlaati hain
wahi toh jeevan ka arth batlaati hain
maa hi se toh ek aur maa aati hain,
maa hi to duniya chalaati hain ....

Mamta ki moorat hain woh
saahas ki surat hain woh
Poornta jeevan main woh hain laati
heenta, deenta ko woh hi toh mita ti .
Hain woh surya ki bhaati
daya kar humpar woh aati
jeevan ki bheekh de chali jaati

Maa shabd ko samjho aaj
usse door bhaagne se aao baaj...
apni maa par mujhko hain naaz
maa shabd ko samhjo aaj.


~~~Chango