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You're facts are scarily wrong.. Really. I'm serious..
I mean.. wtf? Those facts are just messed. When preparing a report for your MBA class you will need to state the sources of each fact... I request you to do the same here.
You clearly haven't even asked a woman how a Patriarchal society affects her. Society and Culture define the way most people - Men and WOMEN treat each other. Simply stating that women are part of and follow the rules of said society.. well, it's not really proving anything.. either way..
My main concern is you're way of tying up facts and interpreting them. I recommend you read some serious works on the problems with a Patriarchal society, but more importantly the Problem with Indian Patriarchal society.
What you have here is not really an argument, it's a very weak set of thoughts lined up in a way that simply shows a lack of depth of thought.