GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Arch,

we use "continual" to show that the particular event is continued without breaks, and "continuous" can be used for the event which happens at regular intervals. in this context, authors suggests that rain didn't stop at any point of time and hence a smaller number of spectators came.

i hope it clarifies ur doubt...


Hi Montaques

I beg to differ here!!
here, A, B & C all are wrong because of "due to". "because" is a better word here. "due to" means attributable. there's a subtle diff b/w the two words.

also as per word web:
'continual' (meaning seemingly uninterrupted) is often used interchangeably with 'continuous' (meaning without interruption)
Arch,

we use "continual" to show that the particular event is continued without breaks, and "continuous" can be used for the event which happens at regular intervals. in this context, authors suggests that rain didn't stop at any point of time and hence a smaller number of spectators came.

i hope it clarifies ur doubt...



Hi,

But what is the difference in using 'Because of..' and 'Due to...'?
Answer should be E...
"of" should come before type...because we cant say only.."is a type"
So we come to C and E..
Use of "that" is redundant here.." One "serves that purpose....
So E..
What do you say?


right, no second thoughts πŸ˜ƒ
Hi Montaques

I beg to differ here!!
here, A, B & C all are wrong because of "due to". "because" is a better word here. "due to" means attributable. there's a subtle diff b/w the two words.

also as per word web:
'continual' (meaning seemingly uninterrupted) is often used interchangeably with 'continuous' (meaning without interruption)



Anish,

could you plz elaborate on '"due to" means attributable'?
Anish,

could you plz elaborate on '"due to" means attributable'?


I found this example in Rajat_NDA's notes

Due to = caused by eg.
The postponement was caused due to rain.
= not because of eg.
The game was postponed due to rain.(X)
thanx everyone for prompt replies.
yes, answer is (C).

I have no issues regarding (C) except that I think "do not have same heritage as northeasteners" should be followed by "have"...am i wrong?

Is 'have same heritage as northeasteners' fine?

So I marked (B) which seemed fit.

(B) because many residents of the Southeast do not share the same ethnic heritage with
(C) because many residents of the Southeast do not have the same ethnic heritage as

Dont u think if we use "have same heritage as northeasteners have" sounds clumsy..because of repetition..??
trustrajib Says
Dont u think if we use "have same heritage as northeasteners have" sounds clumsy..because of repetition..??



I prefer "have same heritage as northeasteners do". Is this wrong?

Doesn't B change the meaning of the sentence?

As two yardsticks are being compared, "as" seems to fit in better than "with".

Also, "the..same with" seems to be unidiomatic; "the..same as" is better..

That's why I chose (C)..

Amar_08 Says
yes, i have this same question
Hi Montaques

I beg to differ here!!
here, A, B & C all are wrong because of "due to". "because" is a better word here. "due to" means attributable. there's a subtle diff b/w the two words.

also as per word web:
'continual' (meaning seemingly uninterrupted) is often used interchangeably with 'continuous' (meaning without interruption)


My apologies for misguiding u guys

Actually, "continuous" means "unbroken" i.e occurs with no breaks, and "continually" is something that occurs repeatedly over a period of time.

@Anish, thanks for correcting me :2gunfire:
1.In three centuries-from 1050 to 1350-several million tons of stone were quarried in France for the building of eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some tens of thousands of parish churches.
(A) for the building of eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(B) in order that they might build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(C) so as they might build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(D) so that there could be built eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and
(E) such that they could build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and
2.Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.
(A) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.
(B) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.
(C) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree.
(D) Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.
(E) Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.
Whats wrong with C
3.The current administration, being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports failing to increase as a result of deep cuts in the value of the dollar, has formed a group to study ways to sharpen our competitiveness.
(A) being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports failing
(B) worrying over some foreign trade barriers being removed, also over the failure of our exports
(C) worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and the failure of our exports
(D) in that they were worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and also about the failure of our exports
(E) because of its worry concerning the removal of some foreign trade barriers, also concerning the failure of our exports
4. According to a recent poll, owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land is still a goal of a majority of young adults, like that of earlier generations.
(A) like that of earlier generations
(B) as that for earlier generations
(C) just as earlier generations did
(D) as have earlier generations
(E) as it was of earlier generations

OA is E but whats wrong with B.
5.Several years ago the diet industry introduced a variety of appetite suppressants, but some of these drugs caused stomach disorders severe enough to have them banned by the Food and Drug Administration.
(A) stomach disorders severe enough to have them
(B) stomach disorders that were severe enough so they were
(C) stomach disorders of such severity so as to be
(D) such severe stomach disorders that they were
(E) such severe stomach disorders as to be
OA is D

Pls help with reasoning...........
1.In three centuriesfrom 1050 to 1350several million tons of stone were quarried in France for the building of eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some tens of thousands of parish churches.
(A) for the building of eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(B) in order that they might build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(C) so as they might build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(D) so that there could be built eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and
(E) such that they could build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and

B . wrong "they" has no referrent
C. wrong same as B .
D. wrong passive voice
E.same as B

so that makes A the winner

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skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.
(A) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.
(B) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.
(C) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree.
(D) Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.
(E) Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.
Whats wrong with C

sometimes u hv to look at the expression of the sentence also apart from ( (obviously)looking at the grammatical errors

C is a bit cluttered and doesnt clearly state the purpose of the sentence > D straight away makes clear what the subject of the sentence is and is therefore more direct than C..hope this helps

3.The current administration, being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports failing to increase as a result of deep cuts in the value of the dollar, has formed a group to study ways to sharpen our competitiveness.
(A) being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports failing
(B) worrying over some foreign trade barriers being removed, also over the failure of our exports
(C) worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and the failure of our exports
(D) in that they were worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and also about the failure of our exports
(E) because of its worry concerning the removal of some foreign trade barriers, also concerning the failure of our exports

Isnt the answer C coz of the parallelism it follows

other options hv the wordy being and other things
1.In three centuriesfrom 1050 to 1350several million tons of stone were quarried in France for the building of eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some tens of thousands of parish churches.
(A) for the building of eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(B) in order that they might build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(C) so as they might build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and some
(D) so that there could be built eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and
(E) such that they could build eighty cathedrals, five hundred large churches, and

Errors are evident in B(they might...), C(they might...), D(there could..) and E(there could..).. That leaves us with Option A. :)


2.Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.
(A) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.
(B) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.
(C) Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree.
(D) Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.
(E) Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.
Whats wrong with C

A and B are wrong due to incorrect comparison... Unlike computer skills...., there is.. ('there is' should be replaced with 'analytical skills'... to maintain the comparison... C is incorrect because in the expression 'to recognize that they are weak' the usage of 'they' is ambiguous... It may point to skills or people... E is too wordy with too many subordinate clauses... Thus D

4. According to a recent poll, owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land is still a goal of a majority of young adults, like that of earlier generations.
(A) like that of earlier generations
(B) as that for earlier generations
(C) just as earlier generations did
(D) as have earlier generations
(E) as it was of earlier generations


Ans is D coz u need to hv a parallel structure is ( verb ) a goal of adults ..so answe shud hv a verb to parallel is ( was ) n adults ( earlier generations )...hope its clear nw

4. According to a recent poll, owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land is still a goal of a majority of young adults, like that of earlier generations.
(A) like that of earlier generations
(B) as that for earlier generations
(C) just as earlier generations did
(D) as have earlier generations
(E) as it was of earlier generations



Ans is D coz u need to hv a parallel structure is ( verb ) a goal of adults ..so answe shud hv a verb to parallel is ( was ) n adults ( earlier generations )...hope its clear nw


D is incorrect because 'as have earlier generation' lacks the subject. In a subordinate clause there should either a direct subject or an implied one. Only option E fits the bill - the subject in that case being the pronoun 'it' which refers to 'goal' in the parent clause...


Originally Posted by montaqes
Hi Anish,
Answer to this shud be (C)....
Though there is nothing strikingly wrong in the first option, the use of "have" instead of "share" is, i think, more accurate. when these two tribes have nothing in common, how can they "share" that "nothing" ..
Note: I have already seen this question somewhere and got it wrong that time

Hiiiii!!
I also believe the answer should be C..
"because many residents of the Southeast do not share the same ethnic heritage as Northeasterners do"
As "do" is not there..Share has to be replaced by have
But is it not right to use ...
" I dont share the same feelings as you do"???
Puys !!!
Please comment..


In my humble opinion, the answer is B. Option C is erroneous as it makes an incorrect comparison - the ethnic origin has been compared with Northeasterns... For option C to be correct, the sentence should have read something like... as that of the Northeasterners..
Abhi@IIMA Says
D is incorrect because 'as have earlier generation' lacks the subject. In a subordinate clause there should either a direct subject or an implied one. Only option E fits the bill - the subject in that case being the pronoun 'it' which refers to 'goal' in the parent clause...


sorry i meant E only ..it was a typo ...u can make that out from my explanation . I had mentioned in my previous post that the verb " was" should be there to parallel the verb " is " used earlier in the sentence . Option D doesnt even have " was " .

Anyways , thanks for pointing out my mistake .
Abhi@IIMA Says
In my humble opinion, the answer is B. Option C is erroneous as it makes an incorrect comparison - the ethnic origin has been compared with Northeasterns... For option C to be correct, the sentence should have read something like... as that of the Northeasterners..


Totally agree with u dude ...the comparison aint correct in C or for that matter in A . I know the 1000 SC doc says the answer should be C but i think those answers are not always correct . I know one question of OG which is also there in 1000SC and the answer given in OG differs from that of 1000SC.

nyone pls clarify my doubt.......

Declining revenues resulting from a decrease in business travel are going to force many airline companies to increase price.

Kaplan says 'declining revenues' is a plural subject so plural verb 'are' required...

But i read in Manhattan SC that 'the subject of a sentence is an entire phrase or clause, these subjects are always singular and require singular verb forms'(page 32)

Manhattan gives an eg: Having good friends is a wonderful thing.

Pls anyone clarify whether subject is singular or plural.