GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Chesapeake Bay "area" would be wrong unless its a proper noun.
This will rule out options 1 and 5. I will go with 4


OA is option 1
However much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means, it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal
state.

(A) However much United States voters may agree that
(B) Despite the agreement among United States voters to the fact
(C) Although United States voters agree
(D) Even though United States voters may agree
(E) There is agreement among United States voters that

What is the explanation given ?

tarun g Says
OA is option 1
nirjharv Says
What is the explanation given ?


The given sentence is correct as written. "The residents of" a certain place is the proper idiom. It is also correct to refer to the residents living in the "area" of the Chesapeake Bay, rather than in the Bay itself.

(A) CORRECT. The original sentence is correct as written.

(B) This answer incorrectly implies that the residents are living "in" the Bay itself as well as the area surrounding the Bay. (Note that if we were talking about residents with houseboats or the like, they would be living "on" the Bay, not "in" it.)

(C) This answer implies that the residents reside only in or on the Bay itself rather than near it or around the Bay area; though there may be some residents living on boats, the meaning of the original sentence indicates it was not intended to be limited to those living in or on the Bay. In addition, logic dictates that the residents cannot live "in" the Bay.

(D) "Around the vicinity of" is both redundant and the incorrect idiom; to live in the "vicinity" of a landmark already includes the area "around" that landmark. The correct idiom is "in the vicinity of."

(E) "Living in and around the Chesapeake Bay area" is redundant; living "in" a particular "area" implies living "around" that same area.


I didn't get this explanation. Can anyone elucidate
With explanations pls...

Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood and was affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness, Franklin Delano Roosevelt, whose death was originally attributed to complications arising from polio, may actually have suffered from symptoms related to Guillain-Barre syndrome.


(A) Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood and was affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness
(B) Since he has experienced his symptoms in adulthood and has been affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness
(C) Early on in the course of his illness he experienced facial paralysis and having not experienced any symptoms until adulthood
(D) Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood, he had been affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness
(E) Since he did not experience any symptoms until adulthood and had been affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness



My Take is E

answer is A

With explanations pls...

Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood and was affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness, Franklin Delano Roosevelt, whose death was originally attributed to complications arising from polio, may actually have suffered from symptoms related to Guillain-Barre syndrome.


(A) Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood and was affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness
(B) Since he has experienced his symptoms in adulthood and has been affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness
(C) Early on in the course of his illness he experienced facial paralysis and having not experienced any symptoms until adulthood
(D) Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood, he had been affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness
(E) Since he did not experience any symptoms until adulthood and had been affected by facial paralysis early on in the course of his illness

My take in Bold.

Since is used to denote a duration of time.
Since its move to CBT in 2009, CAT has gone downhill.

Because is used to provide a reason.
Because of their inability to adapt to CBT, students from XYZ college have fared poorly in CAT.

Leaves us with A and D.

D says Because he had not experienced any symptoms until adulthood, he had been affected by facial paralysis
It means that not experiencing any symptoms has caused the facial paralysis.

A is concise and clear.

vaibhavwadhera Says
My Take is E

Hi EducationAisle,

How do u distinguish between both of them.. I mean 'since' and 'because' ??

Not sure if this is correct. Would be curious to know if you read it in some official source.

In this specific question, from Tense perspective, only A and D (which use Past Perfect) make sense.

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One more to add to the previous one...

Carbon-14 dating reveals that the megalithic monuments in Brittany are nearly 2,000 years as old as any of their supposed Mediterranean predecessors.

(A) as old as any of their supposed
(B) older than any of their supposed
(C) as old as their supposed
(D) older than any of their supposedly
(E) as old as their supposedly

My take in bold
However much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means, it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal
state.

(A) However much United States voters may agree that
(B) Despite the agreement among United States voters to the fact
(C) Although United States voters agree
(D) Even though United States voters may agree
(E) There is agreement among United States voters that

Option C seems correct
Not sure if this is correct. Would be curious to know if you read it in some official source.

In this specific question, from Tense perspective, only A and D (which use Past Perfect) make sense.


Got this reply from Stacey Koprince, a GMAT instructor.

"Yes, we often use "since" and "because" almost interchangeably nowadays. And, yes, this is wrong on the GMAT.

As you noted, "since" is specifically used as an indication of time. "Since 1996, the Internet has grown from X users to Y users."

"Because she was hungry, she ate all the pie."

It's not okay to say "Since she was hungry..." (at least, not on the GMAT). So if you see a split between "since" and "because" and it appears that they could both work, use "because." (You probably wouldn't make the mistake in the other direction - "Because 1996, the Internet has grown...")"

And from another GMAt Instructor
"1: since to express timing - this is when it should be followed by present perfect tense:
Since the launch of new website, we have seen rapid increase in the subscriptions.

2: Since to express reasoning - this is when there is no restriction on the verb tense.
Since he does not follow a balanced diet, even extensive exercise program does not help in weight reduction.

So you need to understand the intended meaning of the sentence to see whether "since" is used to express timing related meaning or reasoning and then use the rules governing verb tense accordingly.

In the light of above, ask yourself - what is the usage of "since" in the sentence in question. "

Alright, now I am a little confused.

I feel it should be last option.. supposedly.!!

What say group??

Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.

1. Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
2. When reached London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
3. When London was reached, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
4. Upon reaching London, we were sent a car by the travel agency.
5. When London was reached , a car was sent by the travel agency to pick us up


I got really fussed up with this one. can someone help out with the correct ans?
Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.

1. Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
2. When reached London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
3. When London was reached, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
4. Upon reaching London, we were sent a car by the travel agency.
5. When London was reached , a car was sent by the travel agency to pick us up


I got really fussed up with this one. can someone help out with the correct ans?
Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.

1. Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
2. When reached London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
3. When London was reached, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
4. Upon reaching London, we were sent a car by the travel agency.
5. When London was reached , a car was sent by the travel agency to pick us up


I got really fussed up with this one. can someone help out with the correct ans?


I would go with 4.
But, I am not sure if this is the kind of question that would be tested on the GMAT.

1) Appears that the Travel Agency reached London.
2)When London was reached (Passive without any rhyme or reason).
3) ^^^^
4)Least incorrect.
5.Ref 2 and 3.

What is the OA?
I would go with 4.
But, I am not sure if this is the kind of question that would be tested on the GMAT.

1) Appears that the Travel Agency reached London.
2)When London was reached (Passive without any rhyme or reason).
3) ^^^^
4)Least incorrect.
5.Ref 2 and 3.

What is the OA?


Correct ans is 5th... i wud however go with 3rd.
reason .. upon should not be used in context, modifier error
but passive voice is not preferable in GMAT fr wat i thot 5th shud be incorrect..
can some one please explain
source : tcyonline.com
Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.

1. Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
2. When reached London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
3. When London was reached, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
4. Upon reaching London, we were sent a car by the travel agency.
5. When London was reached , a car was sent by the travel agency to pick us up


I got really fussed up with this one. can someone help out with the correct ans?


1. gives the interpretation that travel agency reached London
2. not grammatically correct
3. use of passive voice in the first clause and active voice in the second, grammatically incorrect
4. clearly interprets who reached London
5. passive voice, unnecessarily wordy

would need to check the usage of 'upon'

Education Aisle...any help here would be appreciated...Thanks

1. gives the interpretation that travel agency reached London
2. not grammatically correct
3. use of passive voice in the first clause and active voice in the second, grammatically incorrect
4. clearly interprets who reached London
5. passive voice, unnecessarily wordy

would need to check the usage of 'upon'

Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.

1. Upon reaching London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
2. When reached London, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
3. When London was reached, the travel agency sent a car to pick us up.
4. Upon reaching London, we were sent a car by the travel agency.
5. When London was reached , a car was sent by the travel agency to pick us up


I got really fussed up with this one. can someone help out with the correct ans?

Correct ans is 5th... i wud however go with 3rd.
reason .. upon should not be used in context, modifier error
but passive voice is not preferable in GMAT fr wat i thot 5th shud be incorrect..
can some one please explain
source : tcyonline.com
1. gives the interpretation that travel agency reached London
2. not grammatically correct
3. use of passive voice in the first clause and active voice in the second, grammatically incorrect
4. clearly interprets who reached London
5. passive voice, unnecessarily wordy

would need to check the usage of 'upon'


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friendlyfire Says
I have Aristotle SC Grail and Manhattan SC Guide? Do you guys think that this is enough for SC or should I go for some other books also ?

Hey

Are soft copies available online for Aristotle SC Grail and Manhattan SC Guide?

Thanks!!

option D seems to be correct