I found this question on Powerprep and I am surprised with the answer. Can anyone please explain. I haven't posted the answer.
Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed some 50 years ago.
a) while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
b) while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have
c) while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, and have
d) but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have
e) but at the same time introduce 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
I found this question on Powerprep and I am surprised with the answer. Can anyone please explain. I haven't posted the answer.
Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed some 50 years ago.
a) while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
b) while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have
c) while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, and have
d) but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have
e) but at the same time introduce 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
i think its A - maintains parallelism, having gone virtually refers to mmodern methods
Answer pls!
Originally Posted by nitiman View Post
Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have painted a sketchy picture of the activities of an
all-female cult that, perhaps as early as the sixth century B.C., worshipped a goddess known in Latin as
Bona Dea, "the good goddess."
(A) Based on accounts of various ancient writers
(B) Basing it on various ancient writers' accounts
(C) With accounts of various ancient writers used for a basis
(D) By the accounts of various ancient writers they used
(E) Using accounts of various ancient writers
Answer for the 1st one: E
A has a dangling modifier. Only the sketchy picture is based on the accounts and not the scholars. B, C, D constructions are roundabout and not right.
Am sorry for reviving a very old question, but I didnt understand this solution. how is "Based on" a dangling modifier, while "using" isnt?
-Vikram.
Am sorry for reviving a very old question, but I didnt understand this solution. how is "Based on" a dangling modifier, while "using" isnt?
-Vikram.
i am not too sure if my expln is correct or makes any sense but pls refer to OG for a more detailed expln --
anyway here goes.. something should be BASED ON something else.. here there is no something! Hence dangling !
i think its A - maintains parallelism, having gone virtually refers to mmodern methods
Answer pls!
The answer is B
ponram SaysThe answer is B
no...the answer is A
ajayreddy Saysno...the answer is A
I found 'B' as the answer in Powerprep. Besides, in choice A, the pronoun 'they' does not point to anything. If you have a diff explanation then plz describe.
ponram SaysI found 'B' as the answer in Powerprep. Besides, in choice A, the pronoun 'they' does not point to anything. If you have a diff explanation then plz describe.
THEY refers to the modern methods and industrialization..
I found this question on Powerprep and I am surprised with the answer. Can anyone please explain. I haven't posted the answer.
Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed some 50 years ago.
a) while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
b) while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have
c) while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, and have
d) but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have
e) but at the same time introduce 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
Hi,
IMHO, the answer should be B , because in A, the "having gone..." should be modifying the "dangerous chemicals.." not "...the modern methods.." . Since the release of chemicals into the atmosphere should have been regulated/controlled, not the industrial methods that released them. Also, modern methods were not developed, chemicals were.
Also, as per Kaplan 800, if an action is ongoing, like in this case, "industrialization etc. have improved the living standards" , it is nowhere indicated that they have stopped improving the living standards, rather it is implied that they continue to do so, the present continuous tense is always better ....hence "introducing"..
a similar example for this Kaplan reasoning was Q1. in
http://www.pagalguy.com/discussions/gmat-sentence-correction-discussions-25020698
Hope this helps,
Regards,
Shipra.
Thanks Shipra, I agree with your explanation. Keep posting such tricky questions.
The strand fills with water during the rainy season that the peat then holds and keeps it humid, all of which creates conditions enabling trees to grow.
A. enabling trees to grow.
B. for the trees to grow.
C. for growing trees.
D. that enable the trees to grow.
E. that the trees can grow.
Please post the answer along with the explanation.
The strand fills with water during the rainy season that the peat then holds and keeps it humid, all of which creates conditions enabling trees to grow.
A. enabling trees to grow.
B. for the trees to grow.
C. for growing trees.
D. that enable the trees to grow.
E. that the trees can grow.
Hi,
I think the answer should be D since it maintains parallelism of the sentence.
What's the correct answer?
Regards,
Shipra
Please post the answer along with the explanation.
The strand fills with water during the rainy season that the peat then holds and keeps it humid, all of which creates conditions enabling trees to grow.
A. enabling trees to grow.
B. for the trees to grow.
C. for growing trees.
D. that enable the trees to grow.
E. that the trees can grow.
I think its B, but all of which creates conditions isn't this wrong?
OA pls
Please post the answer along with the explanation.
The strand fills with water during the rainy season that the peat then holds and keeps it humid, all of which creates conditions enabling trees to grow.
A. enabling trees to grow.
B. for the trees to grow.
C. for growing trees.
D. that enable the trees to grow.
E. that the trees can grow.
The correct ans is D. It's written that In choices B and C the preposition for is used unidiomatically. I am not sure why is that so. I had picked B.
What's the difference between no one & none? An example for the same:
People can debate the aesthetic merits of these overwrought, disquieting, sometimes gruesome works of art, but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
A. but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
B. but none can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
C. but not a one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
D. but no person can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
E. but none can dispute to their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
Whats the difference between quicker and more quickly. I thought quicker = more quickly?
The U.S. Forest Service, then five years old, decided to put out every fire in its domain, and within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
A. within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
B. within three decades the agency has formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
C. within three decades the agency had formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
D. within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished more quickly than they had been in the past.
E. within three decades the agency has formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished more quickly than they had been in the past.
What's the difference between no one & none? An example for the same:
People can debate the aesthetic merits of these overwrought, disquieting, sometimes gruesome works of art, but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
A. but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
B. but none can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
C. but not a one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
D. but no person can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
E. but none can dispute to their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
Whats the difference between quicker and more quickly. I thought quicker = more quickly?
The U.S. Forest Service, then five years old, decided to put out every fire in its domain, and within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
A. within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
B. within three decades the agency has formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
C. within three decades the agency had formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
D. within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished more quickly than they had been in the past.
E. within three decades the agency has formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished more quickly than they had been in the past.
for the paintbrush,
I think its A for the first one.. on the whole, THEIR seems ambiguous... not really sure if the choices are correct!
For the Forest Service,
think its C, HAD is required here!
OA pls?
and cud u pls let us know the source of these questions?
hi-
not sure for the first one ,
second one shud go with choice 'C'
vav83 SaysWhat's the difference between no one & none?
Here's my understanding of the difference between no one and none - Correct me if I am wrong!.
1. "None" can be treated both as a plural and as a singluar noun, however, no one is always treated as a singular noun.
Eg: No one knows the contents of the box.
Eg: None know the contents fo the box.
2. Also, no one is used to refer to people while none can be used both for people and for objects.
Eg: None of the universities are good.
Eg: No one of the universities are good. (Incorrect statement).
Further, the answer to the question
People can debate the aesthetic merits of these overwrought, disquieting, sometimes gruesome works of art, but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
A. but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
B. but none can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
C. but not a one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
D. but no person can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
E. but none can dispute to their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument
would be B because B is more consise and because "none" is the plural form. If you had chosen "no one", then u are limiting the discussion to a "singular" person rather than to generalize the discussion to a plurality.
In general, on the GMAT, prefer none to no one.
PS and Disclaimer: These are my interpretations of the same and can and most probably will be wrong! :)
--Vikram.
For the Forest Service,
think its C, HAD is required here!
No. "HAD" is not required here.. "HAD" needs to be used only when the action referred to happens before some other action. The action referred to here happens after the previous action and hence a simple past tense would suffice. Further, C uses "quicker" which is less grammatically correct than "more quickly" (In my opinion, quicker is more a slang, and hence on the GMAT, "more quickly" should be preferred). Hence the correct answer would be D.
-- Vikram.
What's the difference between no one & none? An example for the same:
People can debate the aesthetic merits of these overwrought, disquieting, sometimes gruesome works of art, but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
A. but no one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
B. but none can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
C. but not a one can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
D. but no person can dispute their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
E. but none can dispute to their creators' mastery of the paintbrush as a blunt instrument.
Whats the difference between quicker and more quickly. I thought quicker = more quickly?
The U.S. Forest Service, then five years old, decided to put out every fire in its domain, and within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
A. within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
B. within three decades the agency has formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
C. within three decades the agency had formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished quicker than they had been in the past.
D. within three decades the agency formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished more quickly than they had been in the past.
E. within three decades the agency has formulated what it called the 10 A.M. policy, directing that fires be extinguished more quickly than they had been in the past.
Here's my understanding of the difference between no one and none - Correct me if I am wrong!.
1. "None" can be treated both as a plural and as a singluar noun, however, no one is always treated as a singular noun.
Eg: No one knows the contents of the box.
Eg: None know the contents fo the box.
2. Also, no one is used to refer to people while none can be used both for people and for objects.
Eg: None of the universities are good.
Eg: No one of the universities are good. (Incorrect statement).
Further, the answer to the question
would be B because B is more consise and because "none" is the plural form. If you had chosen "no one", then u are limiting the discussion to a "singular" person rather than to generalize the discussion to a plurality.
In general, on the GMAT, prefer none to no one.
PS and Disclaimer: These are my interpretations of the same and can and most probably will be wrong! :)
--Vikram.
very good explanation... thanks Vikram,
for more details chk out this link - None Vs. No one