GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

My response is A. No error is there.
B - the use of 'that are open for ....' makes the use of 'there are' inevitable
C - Although is missing, without it the sentence is not making sence
D - the use of 'and' removes the contrary feeling that is required in the sentence
E - wiered

the answer is D...there is no reason to use "Although" in this sentence....the fact that some museums cater to "local history or various ethnic groups" has nothing to do with the fact that some other museums are "open for exploration on summer weekends"....these 2 are just independent facts and should only be joined by a conjunction....out of the 3 options not using "Although", D is the least offensive...
Qn:794


The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month.

(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month
(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival's month
(C) world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month
(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival
(E) world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival
Qn:794


The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festivals month.

(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festivals month
(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festivals month
(C) world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month
(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival
(E) world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival


my take
option (D)


reason:festival's month sounds bad.so,A eliminated.proclaiming a sacred truce seems incorrect in B.again,festival month seems bad.C eliminated.proclamation of a sacred truce seems odd.so,E eliminated.
D is perfect.one look and you know,its correct.actually,i thought about options while typing
hope i am right

D is the correct answer!

abouttime Says
The OA stumped me....its E :eyepop:..


Hey dude which book you are refering, E is absolutely wrong...
Delinquency rates.... has, what kind of subject-verb agreement is this...
Qn:794


The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festivals month.

(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festivals month
(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festivals month
(C) world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month
(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival
(E) world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival


D looks most appropriate..

Its one of the 1000SC
1000SC: Qn:726
I hope some OAs out there are wrong. I think B is the correct one here,

my take
option (D)

reason:festival's month sounds bad.so,A eliminated.proclaiming a sacred truce seems incorrect in B.again,festival month seems bad.C eliminated.proclamation of a sacred truce seems odd.so,E eliminated.
D is perfect.one look and you know,its correct.actually,i thought about options while typing
hope i am right


OA given is C...looks like they preferred active voice here and decided to allow the awkward term "festival month"

Few toughies:

16. The ancient Romans piped hot water through the walls and under the floors so as to warm up the rooms.
A. so as to warm up the rooms
B. and so would be able to warm up the rooms
C. to warm the rooms up
D. so that they could warm up the rooms
E. in order that they would warm up the rooms



17. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.

A. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
B. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of how he famously and masterfully uses irony, evident in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
C. Famed for using irony in a masterful way, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author slowly revealing a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
D. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author's famed and masterful use of irony, evidenced in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
E. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because he slowly revealed a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece, demonstrating his famed and masterful use of irony.

16. This April, three out of seven people will file tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts.
A. tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
B. a tax return with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
C. tax returns with disks found in a software store and an accounting text
D. tax returns with a disk found in a software store and an accounting text
E. a tax return with a disk found in a software sotre and an accounting text



17. A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health care, education, and the environment.
A) they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
B) they denounce big government- they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful-but supporting at the same time
C) they denounce big government, say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
D) while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
E) while they are denouncing big government- they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful-supporting at the same time

Few toughies:

16. The ancient Romans piped hot water through the walls and under the floors so as to warm up the rooms.
A. so as to warm up the rooms
B. and so would be able to warm up the rooms
C. to warm the rooms up
D. so that they could warm up the rooms
E. in order that they would warm up the rooms
17. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
A. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
B. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of how he famously and masterfully uses irony, evident in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
C. Famed for using irony in a masterful way, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author slowly revealing a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
D. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author's famed and masterful use of irony, evidenced in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
E. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because he slowly revealed a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece, demonstrating his famed and masterful use of irony.
16. This April, three out of seven people will file tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts.
A. tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
B. a tax return with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
C. tax returns with disks found in a software store and an accounting text
D. tax returns with a disk found in a software store and an accounting text
E. a tax return with a disk found in a software sotre and an accounting text
17. A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health care, education, and the environment.
A) they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
B) they denounce big government- they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful-but supporting at the same time
C) they denounce big government, say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
D) while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
E) while they are denouncing big government- they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful-supporting at the same time


My responses -
16 - D
17 - B
18 - D
19 - C
Sorry can't give explanations for each, lot of questions are there...
Few toughies:

16. The ancient Romans piped hot water through the walls and under the floors so as to warm up the rooms.
A. so as to warm up the rooms
B. and so would be able to warm up the rooms
C. to warm the rooms up
D. so that they could warm up the rooms
E. in order that they would warm up the rooms
17. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
A. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
B. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of how he famously and masterfully uses irony, evident in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
C. Famed for using irony in a masterful way, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author slowly revealing a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
D. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author's famed and masterful use of irony, evidenced in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
E. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because he slowly revealed a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece, demonstrating his famed and masterful use of irony.
16. This April, three out of seven people will file tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts.
A. tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
B. a tax return with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
C. tax returns with disks found in a software store and an accounting text
D. tax returns with a disk found in a software store and an accounting text
E. a tax return with a disk found in a software sotre and an accounting text
17. A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health care, education, and the environment.
A) they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
B) they denounce big government- they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful-but supporting at the same time
C) they denounce big government, say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
D) while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
E) while they are denouncing big government- they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful-supporting at the same time


My answers:
16 a
17 e
18 d
19 a

16-d
17-e
18-d
19-b

Few toughies:

16. The ancient Romans piped hot water through the walls and under the floors so as to warm up the rooms.
A. so as to warm up the rooms
B. and so would be able to warm up the rooms
C. to warm the rooms up
D. so that they could warm up the rooms
E. in order that they would warm up the rooms
17. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
A. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
B. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of how he famously and masterfully uses irony, evident in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
C. Famed for using irony in a masterful way, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author slowly revealing a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
D. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author's famed and masterful use of irony, evidenced in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
E. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because he slowly revealed a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece, demonstrating his famed and masterful use of irony.
16. This April, three out of seven people will file tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts.
A. tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
B. a tax return with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
C. tax returns with disks found in a software store and an accounting text
D. tax returns with a disk found in a software store and an accounting text
E. a tax return with a disk found in a software sotre and an accounting text
17. A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health care, education, and the environment.
A) they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
B) they denounce big government- they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful-but supporting at the same time
C) they denounce big government, say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
D) while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
E) while they are denouncing big government- they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful-supporting at the same time


16 - a ; Since choice is only between a and d i'll explain why a and not d. D uses "they" in construction. This "they" does not have a referent in that, it could either be walls and floors or it could be the ancient Romans.

17 d ; choice is between d and e. E uses "revealed" which i think should be "reveals"

18 d - No idea .. it just sounds right.

19. a - B and C are grammatically incorrect. D and E use "while" and do not give any other word to show contrast.

Could someone explain the following OG question to me.

160. While some propose to combat widespread illegal copying of computer programs by attempting to change people's attitudes toward pirating, others by suggesting reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling for the prosecution of those who copy software illegally.
(A) by suggesting reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling
(B) by suggesting the reduction of software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others call
(C) suggest the reduction of software prices for decreasing the incentive for pirating, and still others call
(D) suggest the reduction of software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling
(E) suggest reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others are calling

here is OG's explanation
Answer to Question
Choice E, the best answer, uses constructions that are parallel to some propose', others suggest. . . , and still others are calling ....

How is "some propose, others suggest" .. parallel with "and still others are calling"? Shouldn't it be "and still others call"?

Thanks guys.

though not sure , but the answer choice suggests all the options in progressive tense . so they might have gone for E.

how to use "More" and "Most" in GMAT SC problems , what is the difference in them.
for e.g

I decided that mine was the most efficient.

I decided that mine was the more efficient.
which one is correct of two statements above.

Neha

how to use "More" and "Most" in GMAT SC problems , what is the difference in them.
for e.g

I decided that mine was the most efficient.

I decided that mine was the more efficient.
which one is correct of two statements above.

Neha


Hello Neha,

I think both are correct. It really depends on the context of the statement. If you are making comparison between two things than "more" is the better choice.

e.g
I decided that mine was the more efficent than yours.

I decided that mine was the most efficent of all.

The example given above is just one usage.

Cheers,
Ashutosh
Few toughies:

16. The ancient Romans piped hot water through the walls and under the floors so as to warm up the rooms.
A. so as to warm up the rooms
B. and so would be able to warm up the rooms
C. to warm the rooms up
D. so that they could warm up the rooms
E. in order that they would warm up the rooms
17. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
A. Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
B. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of how he famously and masterfully uses irony, evident in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
C. Famed for using irony in a masterful way, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author slowly revealing a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
D. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author's famed and masterful use of irony, evidenced in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.
E. Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because he slowly revealed a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece, demonstrating his famed and masterful use of irony.
18. This April, three out of seven people will file tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts.
A. tax returns with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
B. a tax return with a disk found in software stores and accounting texts
C. tax returns with disks found in a software store and an accounting text
D. tax returns with a disk found in a software store and an accounting text
E. a tax return with a disk found in a software sotre and an accounting text
19. A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health care, education, and the environment.
A) they denounce the big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
B) they denounce big government- they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful-but supporting at the same time
C) they denounce big government, say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
D) while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
E) while they are denouncing big government- they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful-supporting at the same time

16 - a ; Since choice is only between a and d i'll explain why a and not d. D uses "they" in construction. This "they" does not have a referent in that, it could either be walls and floors or it could be the ancient Romans.

17 d ; choice is between d and e. E uses "revealed" which i think should be "reveals"

18 d - No idea .. it just sounds right.

19. a - B and C are grammatically incorrect. D and E use "while" and do not give any other word to show contrast.



Pls post the right answers, it's already been 4 days! Am totally confused, more so after looking at these replies, which I don't agree to at all.

16: warm up the rooms? r they(the rooms) gonna exercise?
Will go for 'c'

17: "evidenced in" in 'd' looks awkward, and "he" doesn't parallel "Guy de Maupassant's" in 'e'
so, I donno what the right answer is

18: I think it's 'a'

19: 'a' looks fine
Here are a few good ones I found


1. MsChambers is among the forecasters who predict that the rate of addition to arable lands will drop while those of loss rise
(A) those of loss rise
(B) it rises for loss
(C) those of losses rise
(D) the rate of loss rises
(E) there are rises for the rate of loss

2. Initiated five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World on Columbus Day 1992Project SETI a$100 million Investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence.
(A) Initiated five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World on Columbus Day 1992Project SETI pledged a$100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence
(B) Initiated on Columbus Day 1992five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New Worlda $100 million investment In the search for extraterrestrial intelligence was pledged by Project SETI
(C) Initiated on Columbus Day 1992five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New WorldProject SETI pledged a$100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence.
(D) Pledging a$100 million investment In the search for extraterrestrial intelligencethe initiation of Project SETI five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World on Columbus Day 1992
(E) Pledging a$100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New Worldon Columbus Day 1992the initiation of Project SETI took place

3.The nephew of Pliny the Elder-wrote the on eyewitness account of the great eruption of Vesuvius in two letters to the historian Tacitus (A) The nephew of Pliny the Eider wrote the only eyewitness account of the great eruption of Vesuvius in two letters to the historian Tacitus
(B) To the historian Tacitusthe nephew of pliny the Elder wrote two Iettersbeing the only eyewitness accounts of the great eruption of Vesuvius.
(C) The only eyewitness account is in two letters by the nephew of Pliny the Elder writing to the historian Tacitus an account of the great eruption of Vesuvius
(D) Writing the only eyewitness account, Pliny the Elder's nephew accounted for the great eruption of Vesuvius in two letters to the historian Tacitus
(E) In two letters to the historian Tacitus, the nephew of Pliny the Elder wrote the only eyewitness account of the great eruption of Vesuvius.

4.The Federalist papersa strong defense of the United States Constitution and important as a body of work in political science as wellrepresents the handiwork of three different authors
(A) and important as a body of work in political science as wellrepresents
(B) as well as an important body of work in political sciencerepresent
(C) and also a body of work of importance in political science is representing
(D) an important body of work in political science and has been representative of
(E) and as political science an important body of work too, represent



Hey! ne body knows the OAs.
Nitiman! Can u send the right answers plzzzzzzz importantly for 3rd & 4th qs.
5th Dec Question :
An array of tax incentives has led to a boom in the construction of new office buildings; so abundant has capital been for commercial real estate that investors regularly scour the country for areas in which to build.
(A) so abundant has capital been for commercial real estate that
(B) capital has been so abundant for commercial real estate, so that
(C) the abundance of capital for commercial real estate has been such,
(D) such has the abundance of capital been for commercial real estate that
(E) such has been an abundance of capital for commercial real estate,


Hey Sanduadi! can u explain in detail why choice 'd' is wrong. U said it's in passive voice, but i cudn't figure out.