Essay,reco letter and resume for MBA

Hi, Does any one have essay ,reco letter and resume which people would have given when they applied. Any site where i can get info on how to write your resume,letter etc. Thanx and Rgds, Gautam

Hi,
Does any one have essay ,reco letter and resume which
people would have given when they applied.
Any site where i can get info on how to write your resume,letter etc.




Thanx and Rgds,
Gautam

Hi,
Does any one have essay ,reco letter and resume which
people would have given when they applied.
Any site where i can get info on how to write your resume,letter etc.


Hmm.. really not sure what u are driving at!! Are u actually asking for online essays, recos, resumes for B School application??? :shock: But I guess u might find some if u use google...not sure!!!

Simba
Hi,
Does any one have essay ,reco letter and resume which
people would have given when they applied.
Any site where i can get info on how to write your resume,letter etc.


Hmm.. really not sure what u are driving at!! Are u actually asking for online essays, recos, resumes for B School application??? :shock: But I guess u might find some if u use google...not sure!!!

Simba

www.accepted.com

Also, there are a couple of books (forgot the names, costs about Rs.300) which have some accepted essays. They will be useful for getting an idea of the structure of essays.

Also, check http://www.brody.com/business/resources/crafting_a_winning_mba_application.php

- Ramki.

Hi Simba,
I have given my GMAT exam.
As i am applying to univ's ,i wanted to know if there is any site
where i can find ,how to write good essays and take recommendation.


Rgds,
Gautam

Hi All,


Big Don'ts: 15 Ways to Torpedo Your Application

1. Write about the high school glory days. Unless you're right out of college, or you've got a great story to tell, resist using your high-school experiences for the essays. What does it say about your maturity if all you can talk about is being editor of the yearbook or captain of the varsity team?

2. Submit essays that don't answer the questions. An essay that does no more than restate your resume frustrates the admissions committees. After reading 5,000 applications, they get irritated to see another long-winded evasive one. Don't lose focus. Make sure your stories answer the question.

3. Fill essays with industry jargon and detail. Many essays are burdened by business-speak and unnecessary detail. This clutters your story. Construct your essays with only enough detail about your job to frame your story and make your point. After that, put the emphasis on yourselfwhat you've accomplished and why you were successful.

4. Write about a failure that's too personal or inconsequential. Refrain from using breakups, divorces, and other romantic calamities as examples of failures. What may work on a confessional talk show is too personal for a b-school essay. Also, don't relate a "failure" like getting one C in college (out of an otherwise straight-A average). It calls your perspective into question. Talk about a failure that matured your judgment or changed your outlook.

5. Reveal half-baked reasons for wanting the MBA. Admissions officers favor applicants who have well-defined goals. Because the school's reputation is tied to the performance of its graduates, those who know what they want are a safer investment. If b-school is just a pit stop on the great journey of life, admissions committees would prefer you make it elsewhere. However unsure you are about your future, it's critical that you demonstrate that you have a plan.

6. Exceed the recommended word limits. Poundage is not the measure of value here. Exceeding the recommended word limit suggests you don't know how to follow directions, operate within constraints, organize your thoughts, or all of the above. Get to the crux of your story and make your points. You'll find the word limits adequate.

7. Submit an application full of typos and grammatical errors. How you present yourself on the application is as important as what you present. Although typos don't necessarily knock you out of the running, they suggest a sloppy attitude. Poor grammar is also a problem. It distracts from the clean lines of your story and advertises poor writing skills. Present your application professionallyneatly typed and proofed for typos and grammar. And forget gimmicks like a videotape. This isn't America's Funniest Home Videos.

8. Send one school an essay intended for anotheror forget to change the school name when using the same essay for several applications. Double check before you send anything out. Admissions committees are (understandably) insulted when they see another school's name or forms.

9. Make whiny excuses for everything. Admissions committees have heard it allillness, marital difficulties, learning disabilities, test anxiety, bad grades, pink slips, putting oneself through schoolanything and everything that has ever happened to anybody. Admissions officers have lived through these things, too. No one expects you to sail through life unscathed. What they do expect is that you own up to your shortcomings. Avoid trite, predictable explanations. If your undergraduate experience was one long party, be honest. Discuss who you were then, and who you've become today. Write confidently about your weaknesses and mistakes. Whatever the problem, it's important you show you can recover and move on.
10. Make the wrong choice of recommenders. A top-notch application can be doomed by second-rate recommendations. This can happen because you misjudged the recommendors' estimation of you or you failed to give them direction and focus. As we've said, recommendations from political figures, your uncle's CEO golfing buddy, and others with lifestyles of the rich and famous don't impress (and sometimes annoy) admissions folkunless such recommenders really know you or built the school's library.

11. Let the recommender miss the deadline. Make sure you give the person writing your recommendation plenty of lead time to write and send in their recommendation. Even with advance notice, a well-meaning but forgetful person can drop the ball. It's your job to remind them of the deadlines. Do what you have to do to make sure they get there on time.

12. Be impersonal in the personal statement. Each school has its own version of the "Use this space to tell us anything else about yourself" personal statement question. Yet many applicants avoid the word "personal" like the plague. Instead of talking about how putting themselves through school lowered their GPA, they talk about the rising cost of tuition in America. The personal statement is your chance to make yourself different from the other applicants, further show a personal side, or explain a problem. Take a chance and be genuine; admissions officers prefer sincerity to a song and dance.

13. Make too many generalizations. Many applicants approach the essays as though they were writing a newspaper editorial. They make policy statements and deliver platitudes about life without giving any supporting examples from their own experiences. Granted, these may be the kind of hot-air essays that the application appears to ask for, and probably deserves. But admissions officers dislike essays that don't say anything. An essay full of generalizations is a giveaway that you don't have anything to say, don't know what to say, or just don't know how to say whatever it is you want to say.

14. Neglect to communicate that you've researched the program and that you belong there. B-schools take enormous pride in their programs. The rankings make them even more conscious of their academic turf and differences. While all promise an MBA, they don't all deliver it the same way. The schools have unique offerings and specialties. Applicants need to convince the committee that the school's programs meet their needs. It's not good enough to declare prestige as the primary reason for selecting a school (even though this is the basis for many applicants' choice).

15. Fail to be courteous to employees in the admissions office. No doubt, many admissions offices operate with the efficiency of sludge. But no matter what the problem, you need to keep your frustration in check. If you become a pest or complainer, this may become part of your applicant profile. An offended office worker may share his or her ill feelings about you with the bossthat admissions officer you've been trying so hard to impress.


Original poster : Made for ISB Dude
Original Forum/Group : [email protected]


Ketan

Hi Simba,
I have given my GMAT exam.
As i am applying to univ's ,i wanted to know if there is any site
where i can find ,how to write good essays and take recommendation.


Rgds,
Gautam


Buy a copy of "How to Get into the Top MBA Programs" by Richard Montauk.
It will answer most the questions you have about essays/recommendations.

You might have to buy it Online, as I have not seen copies in bookstores. Atleast not in Bangalore and Chennai.

- Ramki.

Hi
I have done my masters from here in India. Now i am planing to do my MBA from abroad. But i am little bit confuse with the application resume. can anyone help me out to write the resume.

It seems you are new to this forum. The discussion on Resume writing which will be greatly useful to you can be seen in the page:
http://www.pagalguy.com/discussions/essayreco-letter-and-resume-for-mba-25004985
A detailed article on 'Tips for Writing a Resume' is also available on:
http://www.manyagroup.com/portal/modules.php?name=Downloads&file;=viewarticle&id;=20

Hey KetanM,

The '15 ways to ...' article appeared on Rediff last year. Same for another article you had posted in another thread about Wharton. That one appeared a couple of months back on Rediff GetAhead.

It seems you are new to this forum. The discussion on Resume writing which will be greatly useful to you can be seen in the page:
http://www.pagalguy.com/discussions/essayreco-letter-and-resume-for-mba-25004985


The link you have given is for this page only. Please check it again.
Hey KetanM,

The '15 ways to ...' article appeared on Rediff last year. Same for another article you had posted in another thread about Wharton. That one appeared a couple of months back on Rediff GetAhead.


Yep ofcourse.. check the date of my post.. it was last year's post.....I guess "bedo_jyoti" bumped into a thread which is one year old..

Ketan
Hi All,


Big Don'ts: 15 Ways to Torpedo Your Application

1. Write about the high school glory days. Unless you're right out of college, or you've got a great story to tell, resist using your high-school experiences for the essays. What does it say about your maturity if all you can talk about is being editor of the yearbook or captain of the varsity team?

2. Submit essays that don't answer the questions. An essay that does no more than restate your resume frustrates the admissions committees. After reading 5,000 applications, they get irritated to see another long-winded evasive one. Don't lose focus. Make sure your stories answer the question.

3. Fill essays with industry jargon and detail. Many essays are burdened by business-speak and unnecessary detail. This clutters your story. Construct your essays with only enough detail about your job to frame your story and make your point. After that, put the emphasis on yourselfwhat you've accomplished and why you were successful.

4. Write about a failure that's too personal or inconsequential. Refrain from using breakups, divorces, and other romantic calamities as examples of failures. What may work on a confessional talk show is too personal for a b-school essay. Also, don't relate a "failure" like getting one C in college (out of an otherwise straight-A average). It calls your perspective into question. Talk about a failure that matured your judgment or changed your outlook.

5. Reveal half-baked reasons for wanting the MBA. Admissions officers favor applicants who have well-defined goals. Because the school's reputation is tied to the performance of its graduates, those who know what they want are a safer investment. If b-school is just a pit stop on the great journey of life, admissions committees would prefer you make it elsewhere. However unsure you are about your future, it's critical that you demonstrate that you have a plan.

6. Exceed the recommended word limits. Poundage is not the measure of value here. Exceeding the recommended word limit suggests you don't know how to follow directions, operate within constraints, organize your thoughts, or all of the above. Get to the crux of your story and make your points. You'll find the word limits adequate.

7. Submit an application full of typos and grammatical errors. How you present yourself on the application is as important as what you present. Although typos don't necessarily knock you out of the running, they suggest a sloppy attitude. Poor grammar is also a problem. It distracts from the clean lines of your story and advertises poor writing skills. Present your application professionallyneatly typed and proofed for typos and grammar. And forget gimmicks like a videotape. This isn't America's Funniest Home Videos.

8. Send one school an essay intended for anotheror forget to change the school name when using the same essay for several applications. Double check before you send anything out. Admissions committees are (understandably) insulted when they see another school's name or forms.

9. Make whiny excuses for everything. Admissions committees have heard it allillness, marital difficulties, learning disabilities, test anxiety, bad grades, pink slips, putting oneself through schoolanything and everything that has ever happened to anybody. Admissions officers have lived through these things, too. No one expects you to sail through life unscathed. What they do expect is that you own up to your shortcomings. Avoid trite, predictable explanations. If your undergraduate experience was one long party, be honest. Discuss who you were then, and who you've become today. Write confidently about your weaknesses and mistakes. Whatever the problem, it's important you show you can recover and move on.
10. Make the wrong choice of recommenders. A top-notch application can be doomed by second-rate recommendations. This can happen because you misjudged the recommendors' estimation of you or you failed to give them direction and focus. As we've said, recommendations from political figures, your uncle's CEO golfing buddy, and others with lifestyles of the rich and famous don't impress (and sometimes annoy) admissions folkunless such recommenders really know you or built the school's library.

11. Let the recommender miss the deadline. Make sure you give the person writing your recommendation plenty of lead time to write and send in their recommendation. Even with advance notice, a well-meaning but forgetful person can drop the ball. It's your job to remind them of the deadlines. Do what you have to do to make sure they get there on time.

12. Be impersonal in the personal statement. Each school has its own version of the "Use this space to tell us anything else about yourself" personal statement question. Yet many applicants avoid the word "personal" like the plague. Instead of talking about how putting themselves through school lowered their GPA, they talk about the rising cost of tuition in America. The personal statement is your chance to make yourself different from the other applicants, further show a personal side, or explain a problem. Take a chance and be genuine; admissions officers prefer sincerity to a song and dance.

13. Make too many generalizations. Many applicants approach the essays as though they were writing a newspaper editorial. They make policy statements and deliver platitudes about life without giving any supporting examples from their own experiences. Granted, these may be the kind of hot-air essays that the application appears to ask for, and probably deserves. But admissions officers dislike essays that don't say anything. An essay full of generalizations is a giveaway that you don't have anything to say, don't know what to say, or just don't know how to say whatever it is you want to say.

14. Neglect to communicate that you've researched the program and that you belong there. B-schools take enormous pride in their programs. The rankings make them even more conscious of their academic turf and differences. While all promise an MBA, they don't all deliver it the same way. The schools have unique offerings and specialties. Applicants need to convince the committee that the school's programs meet their needs. It's not good enough to declare prestige as the primary reason for selecting a school (even though this is the basis for many applicants' choice).

15. Fail to be courteous to employees in the admissions office. No doubt, many admissions offices operate with the efficiency of sludge. But no matter what the problem, you need to keep your frustration in check. If you become a pest or complainer, this may become part of your applicant profile. An offended office worker may share his or her ill feelings about you with the bossthat admissions officer you've been trying so hard to impress.


Original poster : Made for ISB Dude
Original Forum/Group : [email protected]


Ketan


Thank you for this write up. I am preparing application for ISB and other schools and I can take care of these points.

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