GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

OA for this is (A).....and i am not at all convinced with it...looking for a pluasible explaination for this...:sad:

but option (E) says that "land" was a pre-columbian form of ownership...therefore, i think, it is also not correct...

Moi also not convinced with A. Would go with B.
"a form of ownership" correctly modifies "communal form of ownership"
Just wanted to poit out that "fewer than" is absolutely idiomatic....

May be, in this context, use of "of" just after the "less" makes sense...we can also make this sentence using "fewer" as well:

".....emit fewer pollutants than those burning gas...."

I feel that "less" is the correct option here cos we are talking abt pollutants (gaseous) which cannot be quantified.
One more thing.....less___than those burning correctly compares to vehicles. All other options compare vehicles to burning.
Moi also not convinced with A. Would go with B.
"a form of ownership" correctly modifies "communal form of ownership"


yup..i also chose (B)...it is the best of the lot :-P
A. Violates parallelism
B. fewer than is not idiomatic + parallelism error
C. violates parallelism
D. fewer than is not idiomatic
E.Correct less than is the usage
Montaqes
refer to page 125 post 1234 I haad posted the diff between fewer than and less than

Just wanted to poit out that "fewer than" is absolutely idiomatic....

May be, in this context, use of "of" just after the "less" makes sense...we can also make this sentence using "fewer" as well:

".....emit fewer pollutants than those burning gas...."



I think, i got the point now....here "less" is perfect because statement is comparing "quantity" of certain pollutants emitted and not the "number" of certain pollutants :cheerio:

Guys,
instead of posting a question, having a multitude of responses coming in and then declaring the right answer with so much suspense ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and then obviously having a discussion over them (not to mention the one-liner thank-you posts), we could make the whole process really short and effective by just posting the question,the right answer and the specific doubt in 1 post itself.

The people who are solving could just attack the exact doubt and the doubt would be cleared sooner. Basically, less page refreshes, less discussion and faster doubt-elimination. And just clicking the nice green thank-you button would be sufficient too.

See if this makes sense to anyone. Else if you like it the way it is, i'm absolutely cool with it ๐Ÿ˜

Guys,
instead of posting a question, having a multitude of responses coming in and then declaring the right answer with so much suspense ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and then obviously having a discussion over them (not to mention the one-liner thank-you posts), we could make the whole process really short and effective by just posting the question,the right answer and the specific doubt in 1 post itself.

The people who are solving could just attack the exact doubt and the doubt would be cleared sooner. Basically, less page refreshes, less discussion and faster doubt-elimination. And just clicking the nice green thank-you button would be sufficient too.

See if this makes sense to anyone. Else if you like it the way it is, i'm absolutely cool with it :D


ur advice is well taken abchek...

how abt ur Gday? u haven't told us abt it....:-P
ur advice is well taken abchek...

how abt ur Gday? u haven't told us abt it....:-P

got a 700. thinking of retaking it in august. pm your email id. we can discuss there...
Just wanted to poit out that "fewer than" is absolutely idiomatic....

May be, in this context, use of "of" just after the "less" makes sense...we can also make this sentence using "fewer" as well:

".....emit fewer pollutants than those burning gas...."


yep, you are right. "less/fewer of" hints quantity not the number.
OA for this is (A).....and i am not at all convinced with it...looking for a pluasible explaination for this...:sad:

but option (E) says that "land" was a pre-columbian form of ownership...therefore, i think, it is also not correct...


Well, (A) certainly doesn't look like correct.
I chose option (E) because it keeps the meaning of original sentence.."pre columbian form respected by..."

About the use of "that", is it very strict for it to be associated with the noun just before it?

A majority of railway commuters reads or listens to music while traveling.

Is the sentence correct. Is "A majority" singular? I feel its plural As per manhattan its singular

as per manhattan pg 23

The majority of students in the class are hard workers.

here Majority of is considered plural

OA for this is (A).....and i am not at all convinced with it...looking for a pluasible explaination for this...:sad:

but option (E) says that "land" was a pre-columbian form of ownership...therefore, i think, it is also not correct...

In option E, we use that to introduce the modifier not which, and hence it does not mean that land "has been a pre-columbian ..." . I would still go for E. Can you qoute the source of this question
A majority of railway commuters reads or listens to music while traveling.

Is the sentence correct. Is "A majority" singular? I feel its plural As per manhattan its singular

as per manhattan pg 23

The majority of students in the class are hard workers.

here Majority of is considered plural


chsnmurthy,

"majority" is plural only when taken as subject of the sentence. The subject of the sentence "a majority of railway commuters reads or listens to music ..." is the "railway commuters" and not the "majority". Here, "majority" is used to refer to "greater number" of railway commuters and hence, should be treated as plural.
anyway "a mojority of railway commuters read or listen ..." sounds better :)

in the sentence " a government's majority has grown....", majority is cosidered as "singular" because it is the subject.

hope this clarifies ur doubt.
gmatcracker08 Says
In option E, we use that to introduce the modifier not which, and hence it does not mean that land "has been a pre-columbian ..." . I would still go for E. Can you qoute the source of this question


per my understanding, both "that" and "which" are used to modify or define the closest nouns. Only difference is that "that" is used to introduce a restrictive claues (something which just can't be omitted from the sentence without changing the meaning of sentence), and "which" is used to introduce non restrictive clause (which can be omitted without changing the meaning of the sentence). plz let me know if i m wrong:)

Well, this question is from 1000SC!

thanks
per my understanding, both "that" and "which" are used to modify or define the closest nouns. Only difference is that "that" is used to introduce a restrictive claues (something which just can't be omitted from the sentence without changing the meaning of sentence), and "which" is used to introduce non restrictive clause (which can be omitted without changing the meaning of the sentence). plz let me know if i m wrong:)

Well, this question is from 1000SC!

thanks

Manhattan Sc says specifically so about "which" ie "which" modifies the noun preceding it, but stays silent about "that". Also in the examples where a clause had to be modifed and "which" was erroneously used, it corrects the sentence by using a gerund or participle and not "that"...

So may be you are right, but I am still not very confident about the usage as you say.. May be other guys here can chip in...

BTW the answer to the original question as per SC 1000 is A. Is it a case of resumptive modifier ( discussed in psahil gmat notes)????
chsnmurthy,

"majority" is plural only when taken as subject of the sentence. The subject of the sentence "a majority of railway commuters reads or listens to music ..." is the "railway commuters" and not the "majority". Here, "majority" is used to refer to "greater number" of railway commuters and hence, should be treated as plural.
anyway "a mojority of railway commuters read or listen ..." sounds better :)

in the sentence " a government's majority has grown....", majority is cosidered as "singular" because it is the subject.

hope this clarifies ur doubt.


Montages,

U feel the the right way 2 put it is read and listen and not reads and listens. I also felt the same way but manhattan calls the sentence i quoted as right
Manhattan Sc says specifically so about "which" ie "which" modifies the noun preceding it, but stays silent about "that". Also in the examples where a clause had to be modifed and "which" was erroneously used, it corrects the sentence by using a gerund or participle and not "that"...

So may be you are right, but I am still not very confident about the usage as you say.. May be other guys here can chip in...

BTW the answer to the original question as per SC 1000 is A. Is it a case of resumptive modifier ( discussed in psahil gmat notes)????



yah..as per SC1000 answer is A. but i m not sure abt the explaination...thats why I posted it on this thread.....u mentioned resumptive modifier..If u have some explaination of the answer, please share with us in detail...

Also, do share the online link to download psahil gmat notes ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
yah..as per SC1000 answer is A. but i m not sure abt the explaination...thats why I posted it on this thread.....u mentioned resumptive modifier..If u have some explaination of the answer, please share with us in detail...

Also, do share the online link to download psahil gmat notes :)

i have got it from a friend of mine. I can email it to u .. whats ur email id..

one more question from sc1000. This q17

A patient accusing a doctor of malpractice will find it difficult to prove damage if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify about proper medical procedures.
(A) if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify
(B) unless there will be another doctor to testify
(C) without another doctors testimony
(D) should there be no testimony from some other doctorฤลบห†Cฤลบโ€ฐ
(E) lacking another doctor to testify



Ans is C. C looks fine to me but I cant find any problems with A and D

one more question from sc1000. This q17

A patient accusing a doctor of malpractice will find it difficult to prove damage if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify about proper medical procedures.
(A) if there is a lack of some other doctor to testify
(B) unless there will be another doctor to testify
(C) without another doctors testimony
(D) should there be no testimony from some other doctorฤลบห†Cฤลบโ€ฐ
(E) lacking another doctor to testify



Ans is C. C looks fine to me but I cant find any problems with A and D

A - "if there is a lack of doctor" - There is no lack of doctor (scarcity). Its the willingness of the doc that is reqd.

D - Unnecessaruly Wordy. KISS (Keep it short and sweet). C is perfect !
per my understanding, both "that" and "which" are used to modify or define the closest nouns. Only difference is that "that" is used to introduce a restrictive claues (something which just can't be omitted from the sentence without changing the meaning of sentence), and "which" is used to introduce non restrictive clause (which can be omitted without changing the meaning of the sentence). plz let me know if i m wrong:)

Well, this question is from 1000SC!

thanks



You are right, but sometimes things may vary slightly :-)
See this question (from manhattan)

An economic recession can result from a lowering of
employment rates triggered by a drop in investment, which
causes people to cut consumer spending and starts a cycle of
layoffs leading back to even lower employment rates.

A. a lowering of employment rates triggered by a drop in
investment, which causes people to cut consumer spending
and start a cycle of layoffs leading back to even lower
employment rates.
B a lowering of employment rates triggered by dropping
investment, which causes people to cut consumer spending
and starts a cycle of layoffs leading back to even lower
employment rates.
C falling employment rates triggered by a drop in investment,
which cause cutbacks in consumer spending, starting a
cycle of layoffs that lead to even lower employment rates.
D falling employment rates that are triggered by a drop in
investment, causing people to cut consumer spending and
starting a cycle of layoffs that lead back to even lower
employment rates.
E falling employment rates that are triggered by a drop in
investment, causing cutbacks in consumer spending and
starting a cycle of layoffs leading to even lower employment
rates.