GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Reporting that one of its many problems had been the recent extended sales slump in women's apparel, the seven-store retailer said it would start a three-month liquidation sale in all of its stores.


(A) its many problems had been the recent
(B) its many problems has been the recently
(C) its many problems is the recently
(D) their many problems is the recent
(E) their many problems had been the recent



My answer is C
whose 'problems' -- retailer -- singular subject, singular verb -- its
has/had been -- As 'sales slump' happened prior to 'retailer said'. So, past perfect

IMO: A

ps25 Says
Option A...?



Hi PS2

I have a confusion here that in your A choice we have HAD. Do we actually require HAD over here because had is actually recquired when we have 2 actions in past. Here we just have one action which was in past and the other action will be in future. Please clear my confusion.

Answer is A... Got confused between has been/ had been

vaibhavwadhera Says
My answer is C

ps25 Says
Option A...?

whose 'problems' -- retailer -- singular subject, singular verb -- its
has/had been -- As 'sales slump' happened prior to 'retailer said'. So, past perfect

IMO: A
vaibhavwadhera Says
My answer is C

Hi PS2

I have a confusion here that in your A choice we have HAD. Do we actually require HAD over here because had is actually recquired when we have 2 actions in past. Here we just have one action which was in past and the other action will be in future. Please clear my confusion.



the split is between "recently and "recent". if its recently then it will modify extended. if its recent it will modify sales slump.

clearly the intention is not to indicate "recently extended" sales slump but "recent" and "extended" sales slump. So i simply dropped all options ending in recently. was left with option A which was the best out of remaining.
Hi PS2

I have a confusion here that in your A choice we have HAD. Do we actually require HAD over here because had is actually recquired when we have 2 actions in past. Here we just have one action which was in past and the other action will be in future. Please clear my confusion.



The non-underlined portion 'retailer said' indicates that this event was in past.
Present perfect tense ('has been') indicates that action began in past and continues in present whereas Past perfect tense ('had been') indicates a completed action prior to some other completed past action (in this case 'retailer said')
Well, there are indeed two actions here:
1. The retailers statement
2. Extended sales slump

Both of these actions occurred in the past. It is no different from:

Vaibhav said that he had not studied well for the exam.

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Thanks All. Now i undertsand why the answer is A.

source: MGMAT

Since 1989, after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans, who have had to acclimate to an entirely different political system.

A after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified German, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans

B after the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural terms as well as those of economic assimilation, were the former East Germans

C when the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the reunified Germany's most problematic ethnic groups, in terms of cultural and economic assimilation, was the former East Germans

D when the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in terms of cultural and economic assimilation, has been the former East Germans

E after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in both terms of cultural and economic assimilation, have been the former East Germans

source: MGMAT

Since 1989, after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans, who have had to acclimate to an entirely different political system.

A after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified German, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans


IMO the answer is A
source: MGMAT

Since 1989, after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans, who have had to acclimate to an entirely different political system.

A after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified German, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans

B after the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural terms as well as those of economic assimilation, were the former East Germans

C when the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the reunified Germany's most problematic ethnic groups, in terms of cultural and economic assimilation, was the former East Germans

D when the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in terms of cultural and economic assimilation, has been the former East Germans

E after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in both terms of cultural and economic assimilation, have been the former East Germans


My answer is D
source: MGMAT

Since 1989, after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans, who have had to acclimate to an entirely different political system.

A after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified German, in cultural and economic assimilation terms, were the former East Germans

B after the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in cultural terms as well as those of economic assimilation, were the former East Germans

C when the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the reunified Germany's most problematic ethnic groups, in terms of cultural and economic assimilation, was the former East Germans

D when the Berlin Wall was demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in terms of cultural and economic assimilation, has been the former East Germans

E after the Berlin Wall had been demolished, one of the most problematic ethnic groups in the reunified Germany, in both terms of cultural and economic assimilation, have been the former East Germans


My choice - D
RagnRoll Says
IMO the answer is A


Hi Ragnroll

I have a confusion over your answer because in the sentence we have "one of the most problematic ethnic groups" so can we actually have "were the former East Germans". My intent is that can we have plural were with the statement " One of".

Despite forceful legal pleas for the restitution of expropriated cultural artifacts to the place of their origin , the British museum continues to rebuff the German authorities, requesting that it should return the Parthenon marbles removed from the Acropolis by Elgin in 1806.

A.) requesting that it should
B.) requesting them to
C.) and its request to
D.) who request that it
E.) who request them to

Despite forceful legal pleas for the restitution of expropriated cultural artifacts to the place of their origin , the British museum continues to rebuff the German authorities, requesting that it should return the Parthenon marbles removed from the Acropolis by Elgin in 1806.

A.) requesting that it should
B.) requesting them to
C.) and its request to
D.) who request that it
E.) who request them to


My Take is D.
Hi Ragnroll

I have a confusion over your answer because in the sentence we have "one of the most problematic ethnic groups" so can we actually have "were the former East Germans". My intent is that can we have plural were with the statement " One of".


My bad - "one of.." should be paired with "has been". Answer should be D. I was confused with the use of "the East Germans", who were afterwards referred to with "have had".
Despite forceful legal pleas for the restitution of expropriated cultural artifacts to the place of their origin , the British museum continues to rebuff the German authorities, requesting that it should return the Parthenon marbles removed from the Acropolis by Elgin in 1806.

A.) requesting that it should
B.) requesting them to
C.) and its request to
D.) who request that it
E.) who request them to


My answer is D.
A,B,C do not correctly refer to the German authorities. D should be correct because "it" can be used for the museum and not "them".
RagnRoll Says
IMO the answer is A

vaibhavwadhera Says
My answer is D

ps25 Says
My choice - D


OA is D ...
Despite forceful legal pleas for the restitution of expropriated cultural artifacts to the place of their origin , the British museum continues to rebuff the German authorities, requesting that it should return the Parthenon marbles removed from the Acropolis by Elgin in 1806.

A.) requesting that it should
B.) requesting them to
C.) and its request to
D.) who request that it
E.) who request them to


My choice - Option D
ps25 Says
My choice - Option D


OA answer is D
OperationBLACKI Says
Yups correct (C) is not in Perfect Tense the other two options use perfect tense . The reason C couldn't be the answer is that in option(C) the cause and effect relation is not established . ...THE USE of the word "then" implies a sequence of events rather than a causal one . Hope I clarified ur point .


Still, optin D, by the use of "when" also gives the sequence.
IMO,
It shoule be some thing else

During her testimony, the witness referred to facts about the defendant that had been ruled inadmissible as evidence, so judge ordered that her remarks were stricken from the record.

a.) were stricken from the record
b.) are stricken from the record
c.) be stricken from the record
d) are not recorded
e) will not be recorded

Please post the explanation with the answer.