Hi vpitc, Can you please post OA for these questions
Thanks
Guys,
sorry for the late response
The OA for the first one is b and the second is d
Pl. post explanation for the first one
Hi vpitc, Can you please post OA for these questions
Thanks
1. A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(C) After passing through a red giant stage, a stars mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
2. According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect
on Wall Street trading and employment.
(A) its merits, the proposal to tax
(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing
(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing
(D) the proposals merits, to tax
(E) the proposals merits are, taxing
3. According to the professors philosophy, the antidote to envy is ones own work, always ones own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it.
(A) ones own work, always ones own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it
(B) always work; because you dont think about it or assess it, you just do it
(C) always ones own work: not thinking about or assessing it, but simply to do it
(D) not to think or assess, but doing ones own work
(E) neither to think about ones own work nor to assess it, it is always simply doing it
Please provide explanation for the above questions.
1. A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(C) After passing through a red giant stage, a stars mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
2. According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect
on Wall Street trading and employment.
(A) its merits, the proposal to tax
(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing
(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing
(D) the proposals merits, to tax
(E) the proposals merits are, taxing
3. According to the professors philosophy, the antidote to envy is ones own work, always ones own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it.
(A) ones own work, always ones own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it
(B) always work; because you dont think about it or assess it, you just do it
(C) always ones own work: not thinking about or assessing it, but simply to do it
(D) not to think or assess, but doing ones own work
(E) neither to think about ones own work nor to assess it, it is always simply doing it
Please provide explanation for the above questions.
Are the answers
1 D
2 A
3 B
Let me know if they are correct I will provide my explanations then
A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect
3. According to the professors philosophy, the antidote to envy is ones own work, always ones own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it.
MissionPGPX Says1. A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
the last part of sentence: "after it passes through a red giant stage , depending on mass" sounds like the mass will determine if star will pass through red giant stage
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
again "depending on its mass" sounds like star may or may not pass thru depending on mass.
(C) After passing through a red giant stage, a stars mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
This sounds like star's mass will pass through red giant stage not star itself
(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
Correct !
(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole
Again sounds like mass of star will pass through red giant stage not star
I am not sure how you got an impression that coal is an exception. As I had mentioned in my previous mail, coal belongs to a category of nouns called uncountable nouns. The list of nouns in this category is long (almost limitless) and that list would include garbage as well!! So, from a grammatical treatment perspective, coal and garbage would be no different.
On the other hand, the following would be in plural, since we have changed the sentence a bit to make the subject countable (containers).
Several million containers of garbage were dumped into the Yamuna.

I have noticed this too while deciding on the best option but avoided D as it has used "whther" to decide between three possibilties. We generally use whether to decide between two out comes, and mind you "if" is almost always wrong in GMAT while deciding the possibilities of outcomes. It is only used in conditional sentence.
Still looking for some better explanation of this question !
IMO
C
A
A
Provide the OA and then I will post my explanation, confused with 1.
Help
Could someone please enumerate the differences between a clause and a phrase?
I got stuck in an OG 11 question that discusses the same but im not able to figure it
Thanks in advance π
@atrish22,
can you please provide explanation for your 3rd answer. You got it right, how did u rule out remaining 4 choices except A? Thanks... i m putting the question again:
3. According to the professor's philosophy, the antidote to envy is one's own work, always one's own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it.
(A) one's own work, always one's own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it
(B) always work; because you don't think about it or assess it, you just do it
(C) always one's own work: not thinking about or assessing it, but simply to do it
(D) not to think or assess, but doing one's own work
(E) neither to think about one's own work nor to assess it, it is always simply doing it
Oops, u just produced another doubt in my mind. u said whether is comparing 3 things in the sentence.
Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
I am under the impression that the white dwarf is a kind of neutron star because of comma after a neutron star. So i am thinking the choice is between a white dwarf or a black hole. I think if it were 3 things than construction should have been like this: a white dwarf, a neutron star or a black hole.
but my guess is i m wrong. the meaning of all 3 is different. so here whether is used to decide between 3 things... i m confused here...
Hey Mission PGPX
I always try to cast my choice by eliminating other not so demanding choices. I did same here.
B). It seems to change the intended meaning of the original sentence, moreover "it" is redundant in second clause - "you don't think about it or assess it" should be like "you don't think about or assess it"
C). It lacks parallelism in participle - "thinking", "assessing" and then the infinitive "to do"
D). Same as C - " To think or assess" is not parallel with "doing"
E). It is bit awkward with the uses of so many "it".
A). Intended meaning is clear - antidote to envy is one's own work and then one' own work is listing some thing with the use of ":", "it" in every phrase is referring back to one's own work and infinitives are parallel with each other - "thinking, assessing and doing".
And dude share something with us about your GMAT experience, like what to do and what not to do as your experience is very fresh.
I am confused between following two choices: which one is better for GMAT?
Although all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live, Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
Although not all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were carried live, Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
Help
Could someone please enumerate the differences between a clause and a phrase?
I got stuck in an OG 11 question that discusses the same but im not able to figure it
Thanks in advance :)


I am confused between following two choices: which one is better for GMAT?
Although all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live, Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
Although not all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were carried live, Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
check out this paragraph :
"Is it wrong for doctors to lie about therir patient's illness? aren't doctors just like other people we hire to do a job for us ? surely,we would not tolerate not being told the truth about the condition of our automobile from our mechanic we hired to fix it,or the condition of our roof from the carpenter we hired to repair it .just as these workers would be guilty of of violating their good faith contracts with us if they were to do this ,doctors who lie to their patients about theri illness violate these contracts as well and this clearly wrong"
what is the conclusion
1>Doctors who lie to their patients abt their illness violate their good faith contracts with their patients
2>doctors often lie to their patients abt their illnesses
3>doc. are just hired workers like mechanics and carpenters
4>it is wrong for docs. to lie abt their patients illnesses
5>docs like mechanics enter into good faith contracts with their patients
i think it is 3 but answer given is 4 ...
but why ??
the author himself looks confused.... the very first line is "IS IT WRONG ?"
the author is not sure and then in the last line he says "...and this is clearly wrong" so what are u supposed to make of it ??