GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

neha.visionary Says
Answer in color. OA plz


Yep, It's C. I was confused between C & E.
can you tell the reason plz & also the below 1.

653). Although many Whites, noting the presence of some Blacks in the middle class, think that the time for enforcing civil rights measures is past, Blacks generally are aware that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of a radical discrepancy as ever.

(A) that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of
(B) that average-income and unemployment figures show as wide
(C) that the average-income and unemployment figures are showing as wide of
(D) of average-income and unemployment figures that show as wide of
(E) of figures for average income and unemployment showing as wide
653). Although many Whites, noting the presence of some Blacks in the middle class, think that the time for enforcing civil rights measures is past, Blacks generally are aware that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of a radical discrepancy as ever.

(A) that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of
(B) that average-income and unemployment figures show as wide
(C) that the average-income and unemployment figures are showing as wide of
(D) of average-income and unemployment figures that show as wide of
(E) of figures for average income and unemployment showing as wide

Plz post the reasons with the answer.


The right idiom is: aware of.
so A,B and C are eliminated.
now b/w D and E, in D-"....as wide of" is unidiomatic. the correct idiom is- As....As so that means the sentence should be "....as wide a radical disrepancy as ever" so I would have marked E.

What's the OA?
The right idiom is: aware of.
so A,B and C are eliminated.
now b/w D and E, in D-"....as wide of" is unidiomatic. the correct idiom is- As....As so that means the sentence should be "....as wide a radical disrepancy as ever" so I would have marked E.

What's the OA?

'As wide as' is the correct idiom and not 'as wide of as'. Present tense 'show' in 'B' is preferable to present continuous in E.

So, I opt for B

What's the OA?
Yep, It's C. I was confused between C & E.
can you tell the reason plz & also the below 1.


The correct usage is "do so" and not "do it"
that eliminates A and B. i would have blindly marked C but giving due respect all choices and not making any blunder, read the D and E too.
and both D and E distorts the meaning by changing the sequence of events.

Hope this helps!
'As wide as' is the correct idiom and not 'as wide of as'. Present tense 'show' in 'B' is preferable to present continuous in E.

So, I opt for B

What's the OA?


653). Although many Whites, noting the presence of some Blacks in the middle class, think that the time for enforcing civil rights measures is past, Blacks generally are aware that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of a radical discrepancy as ever.

(A) that the figures for average income and unemployment show as wide of
(B) that average-income and unemployment figures show as wide
(C) that the average-income and unemployment figures are showing as wide of
(D) of average-income and unemployment figures that show as wide of
(E) of figures for average income and unemployment showing as wide


Yes, Ans is B.

What is wrong with "D" ?
Yes, Ans is B.

What is wrong with "D" ?

D has the same problem, as it says as wide of that is not right idiom.

What is wrong with E?:shock:

neha.visionary Says
What is wrong with E?:shock:

Aware of and aware that both are acceptable so idiom as----as is under test here. So with POE left with B and E. B simple tense is preferred over continuous.
neha.visionary Says
What is wrong with E?:shock:

(E) of figures for average income and unemployment showing as wide

wrong preposition & tense.
It's always figure of .....

Another confusing one :

669). Stable interest rates on long-term bonds are the financial markets vote of confidence in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation.

(A) in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation
(B) that the Federal Reserve will keep inflation under control
(C) for the Federal Reserve, that it would keep control of inflation
(D) that inflation will be kept control of by the Federal
(E) that inflation would be kept control of by the Federal Reserve

Is the answer B?

Another confusing one :

669). Stable interest rates on long-term bonds are the financial markets vote of confidence in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation.

(A) in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation
(B) that the Federal Reserve will keep inflation under control
(C) for the Federal Reserve, that it would keep control of inflation
(D) that inflation will be kept control of by the Federal
(E) that inflation would be kept control of by the Federal Reserve

Stable interest rates on long-term bonds are the financial markets vote of confidence in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation.

(A) in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation
(B) that the Federal Reserve will keep inflation under control
(C) for the Federal Reserve, that it would keep control of inflation
(D) that inflation will be kept control of by the Federal
(E) that inflation would be kept control of by the Federal Reserve


B should be the answer
Another confusing one :

669). Stable interest rates on long-term bonds are the financial markets vote of confidence in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation.

(A) in the Federal Reserve keeping in control of inflation
(B) that the Federal Reserve will keep inflation under control
(C) for the Federal Reserve, that it would keep control of inflation
(D) that inflation will be kept control of by the Federal
(E) that inflation would be kept control of by the Federal Reserve


(a) looks absurd...
(c) is wrong gramatically..we more often than not avoid using a comma sign before 'that'
(d) is wrong becoz "kept control of" is a wrong phrase...
(e) follows the same logic as that of (c)

So ...B can be the answer...however even in B...a definite article "the" is missing before Inflation..

cheers,
Amit
(a) looks absurd...
(c) is wrong gramatically..we more often than not avoid using a comma sign before 'that'
(d) is wrong becoz "kept control of" is a wrong phrase...
(e) follows the same logic as that of (c)

So ...B can be the answer...however even in B...a definite article "the" is missing before Inflation..

cheers,
Amit


I still could not get the reason for "B", could you explain the meaning.....the word inflation confuses me with the meaning of the sentence.
bishoo123 Says
I still could not get the reason for "B", could you explain the meaning.....the word inflation confuses me with the meaning of the sentence.

Inflation is measure of prices in any country economy. So for stable economy the inflation must be under control.

A small doubt like vs As

Be as your father or Be like your father is correct. As or like here is modifying verb not subject, so I think 1st sentence is better. Please provide the explanation.

A small doubt like vs As

Be as your father or Be like your father is correct. As or like here is modifying verb not subject, so I think 1st sentence is better. Please provide the explanation.


Like is used when you focus on two nouns where As is used when you focus on two nouns doing action.Or you can also say As is used for clauses (which have verb and subject)
As is also used when talking about Processes.

Now, here: I think Be like your father is correct.
We arn't talking about the father and son/daughter doing any action so like is used.

if the sentence is: Drive as your Father does.
so here As is preferred.

827). The science of economics, which for four decades was dominated by Keynesians, who at first stressed the government's role in stimulating the economy, but who were ultimately led away from solutions based on government intervention.

(A) economics, which for four decades was
(B) economics that was to be
(C) economics, one which has, for four decades, been
(D) economics is one that for four decades has been
(E) economics, for four decades, is one that was

827). The science of economics, which for four decades was dominated by Keynesians, who at first stressed the government's role in stimulating the economy, but who were ultimately led away from solutions based on government intervention.

(A) economics, which for four decades was
(B) economics that was to be
(C) economics, one which has, for four decades, been
(D) economics is one that for four decades has been
(E) economics, for four decades, is one that was

Is A the right answer?
827). The science of economics, which for four decades was dominated by Keynesians, who at first stressed the government's role in stimulating the economy, but who were ultimately led away from solutions based on government intervention.

(A) economics, which for four decades was
(B) economics that was to be
(C) economics, one which has, for four decades, been
(D) economics is one that for four decades has been
(E) economics, for four decades, is one that was

Roy Wilkins was among the last of a generation of civil rights activists who led the nation through decades of change so profound many young Americans are not able to imagine, even less to remember, what segregation was like.
(A) so profound many young Americans are not able to imagine, even less to remember
(B) so profound that many young Americans cannot imagine, much less remember
(C) so profound many young Americans cannot imagine nor even less remember
(D) of such profundity many young Americans cannot imagine, even less can they remember
(E) of such profundity that many young Americans are not able to imagine, much less to remember