GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

ashishjha100 Says
I took C......A & B are wrong because 'it' cant refer to 'homes'......can anybody validate 'making do'....

Dear MSD,

I share your fears too.But I guess one cant do anything abt it other than stay focussed.
In this particular example I do not know about 'making do' but I do know that the phrase 'do it' is always wrong in GMAT.Instead it should be 'do so' (Manhattan guide).
Keeping this in mind, we can rule out options A,B.Option E is passive and in GMAT always avoid passtive voices unless it is important.option C has having used with past tense. That leaves us only option D
Answer : E

work "overtime that has the potential" is wrong...
D is awkward...

Vicky,
why cant it be choice B?

-Rajk
1. Following the destruction of the space shuttle Challenger, investigators concluded that many key people employed by the National Aeronautics and Space Administration and its contractors work an excessive amount of overtime that has the potential of causing errors in judgment.
(A) overtime that has the potential of causing
(B) overtime that has the potential to cause
(C) overtime that potentially can cause
(D) overtime, a practice that has the potential for causing
(E) overtime, a practice that can, potentially, cause

answer should be B
potential to is the correct idiom.
What is OA?
Although the Supreme Court ruled as long ago as 1880 that Blacks could not be excluded outright from jury service, nearly a century of case-by-case adjudication has been necessary to develop and enforce the principle that all juries must be drawn from "a fair cross section of the community."
(A) has been necessary to develop and enforce the principle that all juries must be
(B) was necessary for developing and enforcing the principle of all juries being
(C) was to be necessary in developing and enforcing the principle of all juries to be
(D) is necessary to develop and enforce the principle that all juries must be
(E) will be necessary for developing and enforcing the principle of all juries being

the tense could be simple past or past perfect.
the correct idiom is "necessary to"
hence A.
Whats OA?
abouttime Says
Can you provide an example where "in that" is correctly used? (as you mentioned it can be used to qualify something)


Ok.. i am quoting Erin (from testmagic forum) here. He has given a god explanation of the difference between "because" and "in that"..

Erin - "Next, we should also be aware of the difference between because and in that. First, using pure strategy, when ETS puts both because and in that, the answer is most likely in that. Second, because is used to express a simple causal relationship whereas in that qualifies the previous statement.

Confused? Look at these examples:

Cause and effect relationship: I went to sleep because I was tired. ==> Being tired caused me to go to sleep.

Qualification: Going to college is a sacrifice in that doing so requires several years of forgoing the income that students could have earned had they not attended college. ==> Going to college is a sacrifice, BUT NOT IN EVERY WAY; there are many ways in which going to college is NOT a sacrifice, but in this sentence, I want to express one way in which going to college IS a sacrifice.

In our SC, "in that" is more precise than "because." "because" is actually wrong in this sentence, but a lot of my students, when they ask about this question, adamantly believe that it is correct, so instead of explaining why "because" is wrong, I explain why "in that" is better. This usually does the trick."


Now if you got the funda, try doing this SC

Teratomas are unusual forms of cancer because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone not normally found in the organ in which the tumor appears.

A. because they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone
B. because they are composed of tissues like tooth and bone that are
C. because they are composed of tissues, like tooth and bone, tissues
D. in that their composition , tissues such as tooth and bone, is
E. in that they are composed of tissues such as tooth and bone, tissues
Art museums do not usually think of their collections as capital or consider the interest income that would be generated if a portion of the capital would have been invested in another form.
(A) be generated if a portion of the capital would have been
(B) have been generated if a portion of the capital would have been
(C) be generated if a portion of the capital were
(D) be generated if a portion of the capital was
(E) be generated if a portion of the capital had been

If the then condition of a If.. then .. clause contains would/could, then if condition should be simple past.
D should be the answer.
Whats the OA ?

Hi Tank_I
Thats a splendid explanation.
I had done this SC previously and got it wrong. But still wasnt convinced with the OG's explanation.
Thanks a ton,
Calendar

If the then condition of a If.. then .. clause contains would/could, then if condition should be simple past.
D should be the answer.
Whats the OA ?


I think its C
Art museums do not usually think of their collections as capital or consider the interest income that would be generated if a portion of the capital would have been invested in another form.
(A) be generated if a portion of the capital would have been
(B) have been generated if a portion of the capital would have been
(C) be generated if a portion of the capital were
(D) be generated if a portion of the capital was
(E) be generated if a portion of the capital had been

ashishjha100 Says
I think its C


C uses the subjunctive mood correctly.(this is a hypothetical situation)

If I were rich, I would have never bothered to take the GMAT.

See the similarity
If a portion of the capital were invested in another form - Art museums do not usually ... consider the interest income that would be generated
ashishjha100 Says
My pick is C.....wats OA?



The question mentions 2 activities where one occurs before the other. So past perfect tense should be used to describe the earlier activity. Now, eliminating the rest we are left with A, C & E.

The suboridate clause of the sentence aims to convey the meaning that the court showed predjudice by supporting the english men. The other two C & E do not convey this meaning.

So the answer is A.
Art museums do not usually think of their collections as capital or consider the interest income that would be generated if a portion of the capital would have been invested in another form.
(A) be generated if a portion of the capital would have been
(B) have been generated if a portion of the capital would have been
(C) be generated if a portion of the capital were
(D) be generated if a portion of the capital was
(E) be generated if a portion of the capital had been




C uses the subjunctive mood correctly.(this is a hypothetical situation)

If I were rich, I would have never bothered to take the GMAT.

See the similarity
If a portion of the capital were invested in another form - Art museums do not usually ... consider the interest income that would be generated

Hi tank_i,
your approach is correct and now I guess C is correct answer.

But the example you quoted
If I were rich, I would have never bothered to take the GMAT.
should be
If I were rich, I would never bother to take the GMAT.
OR
If I had been rich, I would have never bothered to take the GMAT.

Correct me if I am wrong?

Regards
Calendar
Hi Ashish,

Even i thought it was C...but the OA is A...Could anyone put some light into this....

Regards
Madhav

Hmmm,
Even I thought the answer was C
But checking
where also means "in a position, case, etc., in which" : Where ignorance is bliss, 'tis folly to be wise.
While means "At the same time that" OR "Even though, in spite of the fact that".

Hence I guess while gives the meaning that both the acts (of doing prejudice and then enlisting) occured together. So "where" should be used.

Can anyone correct me?
Regards
Calendar
Vicky,
why cant it be choice B?

-Rajk


when we say "overtime that", it means that overtime has the potential to cause some problem. But the sentence means to say that the work has the potential.

Hi,

Can some one please explain this....

While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, owners of cooperative apartments have shares in a corporation that owns a building and leases apartments to them.
(A) While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling,
(B) The owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, but--
(C) Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings,
(D) An owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, whereas
(E) Condominium apartment owners have a title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while

Regards
Madhav

Hi All, I have just started with my GMAT preparations and looking for some help regarding the Sentence correction questions. Is it needed to study whole of the high school grammer to crack this part of GMAT. Princeton says NO. But then while I was going thru some of the test questions, there seem to be some questions that are not covered as part of Princeton and need grammer book refrence. Is there a better book or web-site that I would need to look for, so that I can forego the need to pick up my high school grammer book and go over it.

Hi,

Can some one please explain this....

While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, owners of cooperative apartments have shares in a corporation that owns a building and leases apartments to them.
(A) While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling,
(B) The owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, but--
(C) Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings,
(D) An owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, whereas
(E) Condominium apartment owners have a title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while

Regards
Madhav

A?
Whats the OA?
sathyadheepcbe Says
Hi All, I have just started with my GMAT preparations and looking for some help regarding the Sentence correction questions. Is it needed to study whole of the high school grammer to crack this part of GMAT. Princeton says NO. But then while I was going thru some of the test questions, there seem to be some questions that are not covered as part of Princeton and need grammer book refrence. Is there a better book or web-site that I would need to look for, so that I can forego the need to pick up my high school grammer book and go over it.

Many people do study basic Wren and Martin actually.
But I would recommend to start with Manhattan Sentence Correction

Hi Calender,

OA is C...Can anybody please explain why?....

Regards
Madhav

Hi Calender,

OA is C...Can anybody please explain why?....



If u consider options C and A,

(A) While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling,

which dwelling??

(C) Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings,

we know which dwelling , in this case.

Also the issue being tested here is the comparison between owner and owners.
You should compare owners against owners
If u consider options C and A,

(A) While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling,

which dwelling??

(C) Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings,

we know which dwelling , in this case.

Also the issue being tested here is the comparison between owner and owners.
You should compare owners against owners


My 2 cents......In A "owner of a condominium apartment" is compared to "owners of cooperative apartments" in the second part of the sentence.......comparison should be logical....owners to owners......or owner to owner