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Ved
Here goes my essay :
Topic - In some countries, telivision and radio programs are carefully censored for offensive langauage and behavior.In other
countries, there is little or no censorship."
Essay :-
I have opinion against the issue and am much of the view that television and radio programs are carefully censored for
offensive language and behavior all over the world.
I understand that there are many programs showing obscenity, violence, vulgarity, chaos etc lets call them "unacceptable
scenes". For instance, if we take movies, particularly hollywood movies, then we see lot of these. Even if we take bollywood
movies then they have followed and are following the similar trend.Most of the time, it may occue that a whole bunch of
family can not watch a movie siting together.Truly, there has been segmentation in viewership for the movies. However,these
facts no way against the motion that these movies are not censored. This is because censorship is not about not allowing the
"restricted scenes" rather its about putting them into correct category. The censorhip board whether its a hollywood or
bollywod or any other, they all have well defined categories such as "U" , "A" ,"PG" etc, in which they put films. It could
be an argument that putting the films in correct pigeonhole could be controversial sometime, however, it, in fact, shows the
maturity of censorship.Such controveries have arisen as far as 1930s, such as those with Hughes Howard movies like 'The
Outlaw' etc. Such incidents does reveal that the content of movies is taken seriously and monitored so that none of the
viewer segment is harmed in any sense.
Apart from cinema boards taking their steps to censor the movies, the TV program and Radio come forward to ensure that
contents are suitable for viewing. For example, you could easily observed on channels like HBO, ZEE Studio etc, the caution
before the start of many of the movies declaring that movie need a parental guidance or it is suitable only for people above
13 etc. This certainly emphasise that chanelles understand their resposnibility in broadcasting the contents.
Also, mostly the channles on TV are becoming quite global in nature and hence same rules and law of censorship applies most
of the places. Thus, its another point which weakens the argument that censorship is not global in its nature.
One imporatant point that cannot be ignored is that moral and ethic values which are significant factor in determining if the
content is acceptable or not, is more closely knit with culture and region.Programs well acceptable in one country cannot be
considered same in other country.In general trend, it becomes east vs west "stuff". Amidst such complex situation as
censorship has played important role across the world. For example, channels take care that Violent programs are not shown in
sensitive area like UAE etc.Above all, individual Country's govt have their own regulations through censor boards on the
program aired through TV and Radios, which keep continous watch.
In todays world, where geography is shrinking by means of communication, its hard to agree there is little or no censorship
on programs.Censorship is being evenly buts it just a question that if viewership is under control or not. Its just like
ciagratte cases coming with statutory warning "Smoking is injurious to heath", but the ciagrette still sell in the
market.Hence, we cannot deny that so called "unacceptable" materials are being broadcasted unevenly across the geography, but
the sametime we cannot deny the fact that censor is being evenly buts its viewship control which is not being taken care of.