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  • Created by @Govi on 24 Jan '07
Delhitimes
anu raj @Delhitimes 10
Posted 17h ago
TOI(1/8/14) -Cinema of the week - review for the movie "Hercules" Came across below sentence , which seems not to be a proper one. "Not only does he have to kick some serious ass, he also needs to silence his inner demons and defeat an evil king." My comments: 1.missing -not only..but also -...

TOI(1/8/14) -Cinema of the week - review for the movie "Hercules"

Came across below sentence , which seems not to be a proper one.

"Not only does he have to kick some serious ass, he also needs to silence his inner demons and defeat an evil king."

My comments:

1.missing -not only..but also -combination

2.Does he have is incorrect

3.Does he have .......,....also needs -not parallel.

Expert comments plz.

VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 1d ago
Beyond the immediate cash flow crisis that the museum faces, its survival depends on {if it can broaden its membership and leave} its cramped quarters for a site where it can store and exhibit its more than 12,000 artifacts.


Beyond the immediate cash flow crisis that the museum faces, its survival depends on {if it can broaden its membership and leave} its cramped quarters for a site where it can store and exhibit its more than 12,000 artifacts.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 4d ago
Correct the sentence in (.........) The Glass House Mountains in Queensland, Australia, were sighted in 1770 by the English navigator Captain James Cook, (by whom they were named supposedly because its sheer wet rocks glistened like glass.)


Correct the sentence in (.........)

The Glass House Mountains in Queensland, Australia, were sighted in 1770 by the English navigator Captain James Cook, (by whom they were named supposedly because its sheer wet rocks glistened like glass.)

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 7d ago
Correct the sentence in {.......} Many professional football teams have found that {they are better served by selecting linemen in the college draft instead of selecting} skill position players, such as wide receivers and quarterbacks, who tend to demand higher salaries and who take lon...


Correct the sentence in {.......}

Many professional football teams have found that {they are better served by selecting linemen in the college draft instead of selecting} skill position players, such as wide receivers and quarterbacks, who tend to demand higher salaries and who take longer to develop into quality players at the professional level.

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zaheer143
zaheer ahmed @zaheer143 3
Posted 23 Jul
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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 22 Jul
Correct the sentence in {.........} Originally developed by ancient Hawaiians, {surfing appeals to people due to the sport's unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and th...


Correct the sentence in {.........}

Originally developed by ancient Hawaiians, {surfing appeals to people due to the sport’s unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and the camaraderie that often develops} among people in their common quest to conquer nature.

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Jats_d_Termi
Jatin Sharma @Jats_d_Termi 5
Posted 21 Jul
Hi All, "If...then clause"...I am reading Manhattan sentence correction for this topic and at the end of the topic they have mentioned that one should never use "Should" in the If..then clause..is that true?? Isn't the sentence "If he is guilty, then he should be punished" correct?

Hi All,

"If...then clause"...I am reading Manhattan sentence correction for this topic and at the end of the topic they have mentioned that one should  never use "Should" in the If..then clause..is that true??

Isn't the sentence "If he is guilty, then he should be punished" correct?

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  • alternatively, if he is guilty,then he will be punished.. 21 Jul.
  • @maniaccat...thanks for the reply.... 22 Jul.
maniaccat
maniac cat @maniaccat 14

should is used only for moral obligations....the sentence will be something like

maniaccat
maniac cat @maniaccat 14

 alternatively, if he is guilty,then he will be punished.

VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 19 Jul
Correct the Sentence in {.....} Hogarth's engravings, which provide a vivid portrait of eighteenth-century London, {are of interest to both} artists and historians.


Correct the Sentence in {.....}

Hogarth's engravings, which provide a vivid portrait of eighteenth-century London, {are of interest to both} artists and historians.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 16 Jul
Correct the sentence in {........} Setting a precedent that lasted more than a century, George Washington disappointed the people {insisting that he should} run for a third term as president.

Correct the sentence in {........}

Setting a precedent that lasted more than a century, George Washington disappointed the people {insisting that he should} run for a third term as president.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 12 Jul
Correct the sentence in {.........} Often incorrectly referred to as cross-cultural psychology, cultural psychology, practitioners of which {collect data through ethnographic and experimental approaches, is} a field of psychology which assumes the idea that culture and mind are inseparable.


Correct the sentence in {.........}

Often incorrectly referred to as cross-cultural psychology, cultural psychology, practitioners of which {collect data through
ethnographic and experimental approaches, is} a field of
psychology which assumes the idea that culture and mind are inseparable.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 08 Jul
Correct the sentence in {.....} Unlike many collective bargaining agreements, which insist on treating {broad classes of workers as equals, employees at the aluminum plant are compensated based on a wide range of criteria} even if they have less than six months on the job.


Correct the sentence in {.....}

Unlike many collective bargaining agreements, which insist on treating {broad classes of workers as equals, employees at the aluminum plant are compensated based on a wide range of criteria} even if they have less than six months on the job.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 05 Jul
Correct the sentence in {.....} {With a recognition that there are challenges associated with adopting new curriculum and securing additional funding,} local school boards handling teacher requests typically encourage creative solutions that utilize existing resources.


Correct the sentence in {.....}

{With a recognition that there are challenges associated
with adopting new curriculum and securing additional funding,} local school boards handling teacher requests typically encourage creative solutions that utilize existing resources.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 02 Jul
Correct the sentence in {.......} The Navajo people adapted to life in captivity in New Mexico in the second half of the nineteenth century, bringing {a distinctive weaving style with them, through which was maintained both a livelihood and} a way of preserving their traditional culture.


Correct the sentence in {.......}

The Navajo people adapted to life in captivity in New Mexico in the second half of the nineteenth century, bringing {a distinctive weaving style with them, through which was maintained both a livelihood and} a way of preserving their traditional culture.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 29 Jun
Correct the sentence in {........} The company's chief executive, whose technological expertise, views on the future of the industry, and decision-making style {were impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside ...


Correct the sentence in {........}

The company's chief executive, whose technological expertise, views on the future of the industry, and decision-making style {were impressive to the managers who worked with her, was also
acknowledged as a leading strategist by many people outside
her firm, including executives at rival companies, whose
approaches often differed substantially from} her own.

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VeritasGurgaon
Veritas Gurgaon @VeritasGurgaon 72
Posted 26 Jun
Correct the sentence in {......} The personal reminiscences of many personal acquaintances and business associates support the notion {of there being many women who were significant figures} in Andrew Carnegie's formative years.


Correct the sentence in {......}
The personal reminiscences of many personal acquaintances and business associates support the notion {of there being many women who were significant figures} in Andrew Carnegie's formative years.

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