Sentence Correction for CAT 2012

Hi Guys, please continue here for the sentence correction discussions for CAT 2012 :: :: here are some links of the previous threads. http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/englis...tml#post781677 (Sentence Correction for CAT 2007) htt…

Hi Guys,

please continue here for the sentence correction discussions for CAT 2012

here are some links of the previous threads.
http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/englis...tml#post781677 (Sentence Correction for CAT 2007)

http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/englis...tml#post994133 (Sentence Correction for CAT 200

http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/englis...ml#post1295659 (Sentence Correction for CAT 2009)

http://www.pagalguy.com/discussions/sentence-correction-for-cat-2010-25049140
http://www.pagalguy.com/discussions/sentence-correction-for-cat-2011-25061597

Please help. Which one out of these is correct ???
Don't be so demure , that everyone misunderstands you.
Don't be so demure , so that everyone may misunderstand you.

His act of gesticulating in the show was simply fantabulous.
His act of gesticulation in the show was simply fantabulous.

and using fantabulous is correct or fabulous is correct ???

Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personalities.
Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personality.

Please help. Which one out of these is correct ???
Don't be so demure , that everyone misunderstands you.
Don't be so demure , so that everyone may misunderstand you.

His act of gesticulating in the show was simply fantabulous.
His act of gesticulation in the show was simply fantabulous.

and using fantabulous is correct or fabulous is correct ???

Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personalities.
Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personality.

is it
1)a
2)b
3)a
is it
1)a
2)b
3)b


brother even I don't know the answers 😃 .....I want to know them.....waiting for barclay saaarrrr to respond 😃 😃
Please help. Which one out of these is correct ???
Don't be so demure , that everyone misunderstands you.
Don't be so demure , so that everyone may misunderstand you.

His act of gesticulating in the show was simply fantabulous.
His act of gesticulation in the show was simply fantabulous.

and using fantabulous is correct or fabulous is correct ???

Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personalities.
Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personality.


1. know few rules : avoid using a comma before 'that' ,this is because 'that' introduces a 'restrictive clause' in a sentence.A restrictive clause is a group of words that introduces any essential information about the subject and hence cannot be done away with.

'so that' is a clause that shows a cause effect relation.
eg. He is so lazy that i avoid inviting him to the party.

Lazy-Cause , Avoid inviting-effect


'so' is used as a coordinating conjunction to show a reaction.

One correct expression would/could be : Don't be so demure that everyone may misunderstand you.

2.Gesticulation(a noun) is the gesture of gesticulating(a verb). 😁

So , His act of gesticulating in the show was simply fantabulous would fit the bill.

'fantabulous' is a misnomer for something that's fabulous.Both can be used interchangeably.(that's my personal opinion however 😃 )

3.Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personality is correct.

Nice set of questions,let me know if this helped.

identify the correct one
a)eyebrows made a big difference in how people perceived the mood of the woman in the picture
b)when the brows were lowered or slanted toward the nose,or when forehead wrinkles were added,ratings of anger and disgust increased.
c)also,raising the outer corner of the eyebrows produced the increase in the perception of surprise
d)raising the inner corner of the eyebrows away from the nose was perceived as a sad facial expression.
1)a,b,d b)b and d c)c and d d) only d e)none

a)Part of my working life was a field ecologist ,probing about magic of invisible animal kingdoms.
b)In my most recent collection ,The invisible kings,the romani language attempts an opening between fields of language.
c)Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it travelled through .
d)Gypsy place-names for examlple are precise riddles that speak shrewdly from the travellers' point of view.
a)a and b b)b,c,d c)a and d d)only b 5)none of the above

identify the correct one
a)eyebrows made a big difference in how people perceived the mood of the woman in the picture
b)when the brows were lowered or slanted toward the nose,or when forehead wrinkles were added,ratings of anger and disgust increased.
c)also,raising the outer corner of the eyebrows produced the increase in the perception of surprise
d)raising the inner corner of the eyebrows away from the nose was perceived as a sad facial expression.
1)a,b,d b)b and d c)c and d d) only d e)none

a)Part of my working life was a field ecologist ,probing about magic of invisible animal kingdoms.
b)In my most recent collection ,The invisible kings,the romani language attempts an opening between fields of language.
c)Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it travelled through .
d)Gypsy place-names for examlple are precise riddles that speak shrewdly from the travellers' point of view.
a)a and b b)b,c,d c)a and d d)only b 5)none of the above


My takes in bold
1. know few rules : avoid using a comma before 'that' ,this is because 'that' introduces a 'restrictive clause' in a sentence.A restrictive clause is a group of words that introduces any essential information about the subject and hence cannot be done away with.

'so that' is a clause that shows a cause effect relation.
eg. He is so lazy that i avoid inviting him to the party.

Lazy-Cause , Avoid inviting-effect


'so' is used as a coordinating conjunction to show a reaction.

One correct expression would/could be : Don't be so demure that everyone may misunderstand you.

2.Gesticulation(a noun) is the gesture of gesticulating(a verb). 😁

So , His act of gesticulating in the show was simply fantabulous would fit the bill.

'fantabulous' is a misnomer for something that's fabulous.Both can be used interchangeably.(that's my personal opinion however 😃 )

3.Being a motivator,I have quizzed almost every facet of people's personality is correct.

Nice set of questions,let me know if this helped.


wow!!!!! such a lucid explanation! 😃 thank you soooo much :)
by the way saaarrr, this wasn't a set of questions..he he...I was writing a paragraph and felt these doubts :)
now I've got it

Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.

1 Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.

2 Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of how he famously and masterfully uses irony, evident in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.

3 Famed for using irony in a masterful way, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author slowly revealing a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.

4 Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because of the author's famed and masterful use of irony, evidenced in the slow revelation of a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece.

5 Many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics because he slowly revealed a tragic twist of fate at the end of each piece, demonstrating his famed and masterful use of irony

56. Many of the earliest known images of Hindu deities
in India date from the time of the Kushan Empire,
fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of
Mathura or Gandharan grey schist.
(A) Empire, fashioned either from the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or
(B) Empire, fashioned from either the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or from
(C) Empire, either fashioned from the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or
(D) Empire and either fashioned from the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or from
(E) Empire and were fashioned either from the
spotted sandstone of Mathura or from

56. Many of the earliest known images of Hindu deities
in India date from the time of the Kushan Empire,
fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of
Mathura or Gandharan grey schist.
(A) Empire, fashioned either from the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or
(B) Empire, fashioned from either the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or from
(C) Empire, either fashioned from the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or
(D) Empire and either fashioned from the spotted
sandstone of Mathura or from
(E) Empire and were fashioned either from the
spotted sandstone of Mathura or from


'E' looks good ! what's the OA ?
barclays_boss Says
'E' looks good ! what's the OA ?


bhai Explaination E is correct
identify the correct one
a)eyebrows made a big difference in how people perceived the mood of the woman in the picture
b)when the brows were lowered or slanted toward the nose,or when forehead wrinkles were added,ratings of anger and disgust increased.
c)also,raising the outer corner of the eyebrows produced the increase in the perception of surprise
d)raising the inner corner of the eyebrows away from the nose was perceived as a sad facial expression.
1)a,b,d b)b and d c)c and d d) only d e)none

Exp. : 'C' is wrong because the 'A' of 'also' has to be a capital letter.There's something amiss as well...can't spot that though !

a)Part of my working life was a field ecologist ,probing about magic of invisible animal kingdoms.
b)In my most recent collection ,The invisible kings,the romani language attempts an opening between fields of language.
c)Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it travelled through .
d)Gypsy place-names for examlple are precise riddles that speak shrewdly from the travellers' point of view.
a)a and b b)b,c,d c)a and d d)only b 5)none of the above


my takes in bold...let me know of the OAs
vishal das Says
bhai Explaination E is correct


Vishal,you just need to have parallel comparison of things while using 'either-or'
barclays_boss Says
my takes in bold...let me know of the OAs


barclays ji all the sentences start with a capital letter sry for the problem ...
the oas are
1)
2)

plz explain the errors . IS TOWARD AN ERROR IN SENTENCE B)OF THE FIRST ONE...
thankyou for the response 😃
barclays ji all the sentences start with a capital letter sry for the problem ...
the oas are
1)
2)

plz explain the errors . IS TOWARD AN ERROR IN SENTENCE B)OF THE FIRST ONE...
thankyou for the response :)

"Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it travelled through"
this is option 'c' in your question.Even if i consider the first word to be in caps,what about the missing 'is' after 'it' ?

Shouldn't the sentence be : Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it is travel led through.
"Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it travelled through"
this is option 'c' in your question.Even if i consider the first word to be in caps,what about the missing 'is' after 'it' ?

Shouldn't the sentence be : Romani contains many words and phrases from other tongues-language is absorbed as it is travel led through.


so the sentence is a fragment and does not contain any finite verb ..:)
one more doubt ...
sir in sentence b) shouldnt it be towards and not toward..plz correct me

3. Teachers in this country have generally been trained either to
approach mathematics like a creative activity or that they should
force students to memorize rules and principles without truly
understanding how to apply them.
to approach mathematics like a creative activity or that they
should force students to memorize rules and principles
to approach mathematics like a creative activity or to force
students to memorize rules and principles
to approach mathematics as a creative activity or to force
students to memorize rules and principles
that they should approach mathematics as a creative
activity or to force students to memorize rules and
principles
that they should approach mathematics like a creative
activity or that they should force students to memorize
rules and principles

identify the correct one:
1)a)The fact that japan and korea have so far resisted the great disruption
b)is testimony for the power of culture to shape economic choices.
c)Both countries ,have shown strong cultural preferences for more traditional female roles ,
d)and both retained discriminatory formal laws that make it less likely for women to enter the workforce .
e)Particularly in korea,Confucianism gives broad support to the patriachal family

1)a and e 2)a,c,e 3)b,c,d 4)d and e 5)e only

plz explain the errors also..:)